Woah, I didn't expect that. *wipes sweat off forehead*

I liked how well you wrote your sentences and paragraphs.

It is a dark story, and I get how Faith and Buffy's relationship are mostly shown through the copious amount of sex they seem to have. I wondered for a bit if I was still in c2 or in literotica. LoL!

I did have some trouble figuring out if Faith was having sex with Buffy or another blonde, as you've mentioned darkening of the eyes. For a moment I questioned myself since B had hazel eyes and well, I am not sure if the pupils can grow so big that they become that noticeable.

Anyway. Good writing style :)