Not Fade Away
Nice happy ending. Thank you for writing this.
It is great to read a fanfic that is timed around Season 8/9 of the comics. The progression is believable and well done. Love that the story includes all the main characters of BTVS and giving them a solid chunk in the conversations and plot as it normally would in the canon.
You have a talent. Please continue writing Buffy and Faith stories.
glad i finally thought to check the repy section of this fic at the other site :) freaking awesome chaps and end (though i hate to see it end) to a brilliant fic
That is a fantastic ending to a fantastic story! :)
I really like that final showdown between Faith and Satsu. It feels like Faith really needed that as some sort of closure. It also showed that as much as she might hate someone she won't kill. Shows a lot of growth in her.
That final scene with the two of them was very well written! Loved it! Great story! :)
It's nice to see that Buffy isn't running from what she feels for Faith. It seems like they're both nervous but they're willing to go with it.
I like that there isn't some big drama surrounding the fact they're into each other. Everyone's fairly accepting and that's great to read. Great chapter!
I love, love, love Buffy's reaction to seeing Dawn and Xander together. She went from homicidal to confused in a matter of minutes. I wonder what her next conversation with Dawn will be like.
Having both Faith and Buffy second guessing themselves and what happened really works in this chapter. Buffy seems to just catch people kissing whereas Faith tries to even avoid the possibility of flirting with someone else. It shows they have the same worries and insecurities.
Well done! :)
It's great to see that everyone is accepting Faith into the group and the day to day activities of the castle. It's understandable that she would be a little nervous about them giving her a room and everything but at least she went along with getting everything.
Yay for kissing! Talking is overrated when there's kissing. I like that Buffy is insistent about Faith visiting and talking to her even though she's weak.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
I'm really enjoying this. I like that its set after Giles started working with Faith we get to see how his influence has brought her to this place she's in, more emotionally stable and matue. I can't wait to see what happens after Faith saves Buffy, I can hardly see Buffyfalling right into her arms, as much as we'd all like that.
Very happy to see you posting this one here! Now I have the urge to reread all the chapters (and reread Just a Fool because I love it). :)