did he do something to faith?seems like she has a short fuse and could easily hurt someone, slayer or not!
Yay, an update!
I really love that Buffy is willing to resist the urge to run in order to be with Faith. It's refreshing to already see that she's stepping up and going with her feelings. That's what Faith seems to need.
I'm intrigued by this big bad. I can't wait to find out more! :)
I'm loving this!! I feel bad for all people that Buffy just abandoned, and obviously Faith lying to them has gotta be a big slap in the face. Can't wait to see how the reunion pans out.
This Tarak dude is pretty interesting, am I right in thinking he's going to try and use magic to turn Faith against Buffy? Sad times if he is, but also awesome!! I love it when we get a bit of bad girl Faith, would be really interesting to see how Buffy deals with that side of her again after 5 years of being in a relationship with her.
This is really good, I can't wait for the next hit!
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I really like how Faith acts in this chapter. She's not scared, even though Buffy is. Instead, she's just pissed and angry and I love when she gets that way.
The way you have the plot moving here and I can't wait to read what's next. It feels like Faith and Buffy will be returning to Cleveland soon and I can't wait! :)
now i want to know what it says on the wall?
Wow! I love how close Faith and Buffy are and that they're so open to admit their feelings for each other. And it was all very hot!!
I'm very curious about what's going to happen now that Tarek Yareli will go after Buffy and Faith and no one knows where they are. Can't wait for the next chapter!
bit of over reaction by willow. the ending kind of makes it seem like yarli wants at wills more then the slayers? kind of like he is just using them to hurt her!
while i like the chapter it kind of seems like buffy went behind faiths back and is setting her up for a fall! don't think she did it with that intent, just seems like everyone will be pissed at faith and ready to jump her when they get home. you with your big bads and all the little twists and turns, always keep me on the edge of my seat! post again sooooon.
Definitely liking where this is going so far.
Wow, great chapter!
I think my favorite part was that Buffy had the courage to send that email to Dawn. It feels that it took a lot to send it and that she was able to admit that she's in love with Faith. Love that Dawn was so matter of fact about it, too.
Sounds like the twists and turns are just getting started. Can't wait for more! :)
I love the start of this one! It's interesting that the start is that Faith is essentially hiding Buffy's whereabouts from everyone. It really shows how much she cares for her in spite of the fact Buffy left everything.
Now I want to know what will happen once they arrive in Cleveland. Update soon! :)
Very nice start...I'm already hooked :)
very nice start. love your writing. hope to see another chapter soon.
Invalid... A new fic!!! Woop!!!
i love your stuff and I'm sure I've told you many times!!!
good start, very interesting! Can't wait to see how Willow responds when she goes to pick up Fairh from the airport and Buffy is with her. Looking forward to seeing how the gang responds too, especially Dawn. I'm anticipating a major blow out between them!!!
please update again soon!!!
Awesome start. Kinda scared kuz of the character death thing so I hope Im not gonna cry at the end or somewhere in the middle of this lol but then again some main character death stories have made me cry but were FUCKING AWESOME =)
Youre an amazing writer. I trust whatever you write