Magnetic
Where else can I send my fan letters cos boy do I have a stack of notes for you!
This was so smooth, the rhythm of your writing really had me pulled into the world you have created here.
Where else can I send my fan letters cos boy do I have a stack of notes for you!
This was so smooth, the rhythm of your writing really had me pulled into the world you have created here.
Yay, more fic! Glad to see you're stretching your Faith writing muscles too, it gives us Walk the Line fans hope for the future :D
Anyways, I loved the insights into Faith's past, and a fuffy shower scene is always appreciated, especially when it's as tender and well-written as this one. Tho now that they've learned about this slayer power, considering how often Faith and Buffy get injured you gotta feel for their housemates :)
Oh man, imagine if this healing via touch were true, the amount of sex happening during season 7. Hahaha!
I loved how the scenes were so descriptive, from Faith's memory of her being hurt by her mother, to after Buffy beat the crap out of her. Even though there weren't a lot of scenes, the story felt long, complete, and filling (does that even make sense? *burps).
Poor Faith, the punching bag to Buffy's intense burst of anger. I really felt sorry for her as she walked from the bar, went in the shower, and tried to take of her clothes. It feels to me like she's exhibiting self-pity, without the crying. Oh yeah... "You feel it, you learn to live with it, and you take advantage of any way to dull it when you can."
I'm glad that Buffy was strong enough to admit that she was wrong for hurting Faith. And I am extremely happy she stepped inside that shower, cause waaaah.
Maybe I should send you more similar looking photos. And cookies. Promise I won't eat them like I did that other time. I am gonna wait for the next one-shot, ok? :D :D :D
This was the perfect mix of light and shade. It stepped into the past without drowning in it, and gave us a sense of history between them without getting too distracted. I liked the bit with little Faith at the fair too; giving us further insight into her as well as linking everything together with the magnetic theme.
Nice to see Buffy realising she was being a bit of a jerk. And the shower scene was a pleasent bonus :D
Good stuff. Keep writing these write-y things ;)
Now that was nice. I really like the way you write Faith, there is always enough underlying regret, cynicism and humor to her that makes it feel true to character, and the regret isnt crippling, Its more an impetus to do better. And the fuffy loving was as usual
with your stories so much more than sex for sex. Ive always been a fan of Sexual Healing, this was a nice treat on a early, early should be sleeping Monday morning.
Wow, that was...really hot, and sweet!
Loved the stuff about Faith's background, it felt very true to read.
Plus Faith and all her regrets about the past, and how being with Buffy felt like healing all those past hurts...Beautiful.
Really liked this. Lovely to see you writing again!
I love it!
Leave it to Faith to go snooping and read about some super healing between slayers. Really enjoyed how she was thinking about how she can try to heal but doesn't really think it'll ever happen until Buffy walks into the bathroom.
The fact that they tease each other at the end is so cute. Perfect ending!
Can't wait for what you write next! :)
"Faith is pretty sure that Ginny and Evie never tried slayer healing like she and Buffy just had." OR DID THEY? Oh wait, this isn't that kind of fandom. I'll just be over here in the corner with my bad jokes. :p
I hope Faith snaps out of the Buffy induced haze before calling Angel. Don't tell him about advanced slayer healing through les sex! Damn girl, that's cold. :) I've never thought about twins being called as slayers before. I know it wasn't the point of the story but I thought that was pretty cool. Although they have evil sounding names. Probably because they sound British, and British teens are uniformly evil as I have learned from movies. *ducks Dylan's shoe with GW style grace*
My ramblings aside, I loved this. I am awed by your fast writing ability. :) I am so happy to see you posting again! I loved the insight into Faith's background and the magnetic theme throughout. You are so good at injecting the funny into even sweet and wonderful scenes like here. I refuse to believe this is an all slayers phenomenon and not a Buffy and Faith and okay those twins that one time thing. Kennedy is not healing no one, no how, is what I'm saying. :p
Now write moar! Moar I say! :D