This story was so real I cried for fifteen minutes when I read the crash scene. I had alligator tears falling on my paper as I read everything after. You are an amazing writer and this grabbed my heart strings and never let go. Thank you for writing and sharing this great gift you have.
phew! just knew thats how that one was gonna go. to sad.
Wow, that was so unbelievably sad. Very well written, very emotional. I'm fading at work and had to make sure I didn't cry.
I was really hoping that something would happen that would make it a happy ending but I think it works better this way. Heartbreaking but so realistic. Good work on this one since I'm sure it took a lot to write.
Ouch, my heart! I can't, I just can't. I have tears running down my face. Thanks for that lol What a powerfully heartbreaking story! I'm going to go hug my girlfriend now.
First of all, how dare you.
Second of all, where the hell do you come off.
Third, thank god I read this at work and not at home drinking because I would've been a sobbing mess. So, so heart-breaking. I hate how much I loved this.