Really interesting. I'd like the idea of putting Faith into a complete new environemnt when she wakes up (I'm just assuming that Faith will wake up at some point :-) No more Sunnydale, a lot of new Slayers. You managed to really capture the feeling of helplessness when it comes to Faiths current situation. And even more so how her situation affects Buffy and the others. A very intense read. I don't know if I'm completely on board when it comes to Buffys affection for Faith. I get the guilt she must feel but there has been a world of hurt that Faith unleashed on Buffy. And I don't buy into the whole "Faith is the victim" interpretation. I'm not saying that Buffy is innocent but she is hardly responsible for everything Faith did. Well, just my two cents, I guess :-)
In conclusion: I really enjoyed the first two chapters and I'm looking forward to the next one. Always nice to see that after all these years the BtVS Fandom is not dead.
Your writing always has such a gentle pull to it. Even if the theme is dark there is something very poetic about the prose. This is such an interesting take on the series. I really find it compelling. Hope to read more soon.
I like where you are going with this so far, please keep it going!