Interesting fic, it shows the price of not seeing what is in front of you or not realizing what you had (or could have had) until its gone. I think you got the ages wrong though lol, I mean if you having Kennedy as five years younger than Willow, then Willow could have commited a crime in season seven when they consumated their relationship as Willow would have been 20-21 (same age as Buffy) and kennedy would have been 16 at most and 15 at least.

Author's Response:

You have a point there... I didn't even think of that... Good thing most of my stuff isn't canon.... Anyway, I appreciate you taking the time to respond... feedback is the source of life and ideas for us writers and I'm grateful that you felt enough to give me some love.  Thank you.