Yep, this one hit the spot!
Great ideas with a fully immersive environment. Loved the town and it's inhabitants. As always (apart from your last fic) characterisation of principal players is fantastic.
Don't mind me, I think all your stories are fantastic and well written. Reminds me I need to finish my attempt. Any advice on how to finish a fic?
Thanks.
Author's Response:Oh man. I have no idea how I finish anything. Sometimes I leave stuff sitting for years and then go back, so I don't think I'm a good model on how to succeed at finishing fics! Haha. I am struggling with my Xmas fic now. I'm kind of tired and just don't wanna work on it!
Good Chapter. Was expecting a slower build up and realization, but hey, all good.
And Sophie B is fucking awsome. Wash your mouth out young lady!
Author's Response:Lol. I said she was awesome and I'd fight anyone who said otherwise!
No time for slow build in this one! I had intended it to me a lot shorter (word count wise) so wanted to jump right in. But it kind of took a life of its own.
That song is nearly as appreciated by me as this story is. I, for one, fully approve.
Author's Response:Thank you!