This fic makes me giggle and kick my feet at every sentence. Send help
I absolutely adore this story and I love the way you write! I can picture everything
Author's Response:Thank you!
Cordy for the win! Such great characterisation from all the cast, it feels like we know these people. At one point been each of these people in certain situations. You continue to delight and captivate us in plot, setting and angst. Can't wait for what's coming next.
Thank you.
Author's Response:Thank you!!! I love Cordy. We can always use more Cordy.
These last two chapters have been on fire! And I gotta say, now I'm a bit thrown with the theory I had...also curious to see what you have in store what with Spike returning at some point. And still...the rhythm of this story is so on point, honestly loving this story so much I'm hoping we still have a long way to go.
Author's Response:Thank you! Curious to know how your theory has been thrown? :) Spike's going to reappear quite soon so all will be revealed there. I think there are maybe 16 chapters altogether, but we will see!
You jerk, making me read fanfic again. Stupid, insanely talented jerk.
:p
Love you, friend! And love your Fuffy. It's the absolute best.
P.S. - Don't they know they're girlfriends? Because they are.
Author's Response:Just when you think you're out... I suck you back in. :)
They do not know. Because they are dumbasses.
I have a theory about this GG girl...
Author's Response:
Laaaaaaaawd this was on fire! The last two chapters...just brilliant. Perfect pace, plot, and you still maintain the integrity of the characters. I get that you might be leaning towards making this as PwP as possible but I really love it when you stray into those moments where they get to connect on a different level, and anyway, I wouldn't mind seeing more of that. Can't wait for next week! Thank you thank you!
Author's Response:I think I'm going for a mix of PWP but also good emotional content, so there will still be more of that coming. :)
Really hot and enjoyable chapter!
And to comment on something other than the really hot sex scene: Oz, Willow, and Xander's lines are funny and all sound like their charcter.
Thanks again for the good read.
=D
Author's Response:Haha, good! I always try to keep everyone in character. :) Thank you!
First, I would like to start off by saying that I'm a huge fan of your work! I've read everything you have written on this site and every single one is mind blowing! Everytime I read your fics I find myself binging it because it's just so damn good. This fic in particular has already made it to my list of favorite fics and it hasn't even been completed yet!
Thank you for writing!
Simply amazing - patiently waiting for chapter 7! <3
Author's Response:Thanks so much! :) :) I appreciate it!
needed this today <3
Thanks :)
Author's Response:Aww yay, thank you!
"But mostly the warmth in her own chest, the quiet in her bones" I loved this part. Such good writing.
And again, living for the moments where you nurture their connection. Also just noticed you have the angst tag added so now I'm slightly worried...
Author's Response:Lol, don't worry too much. :) They'll have a happy ending, I promise. :D
PWP is overrated. It's all about the journey, so that's why with you in the driving seat I'll happily enjoy the ride.
As for Faith's screen name I could be way off, but my guess is it's related to the actress Eliza Dushku:
Moon - Poster for Eliza's first movie "That Night" has a moon on it
Baby - Eliza was young in that film, could be considered a "baby"
617 - Eliza met her husband June 2017
Author's Response:Thank you!! The screen name is simpler than that.
Ay...this chapter was the perfect mix of sweet and hot, btw I think you do so well in introducing the change in the air between them, it doesn't come across as forced, which can happen in stories sometimes. it's just.. like a perfect breeze.
Thank you!!
Author's Response:Thank you so much!
*claps*
Another great Sunday for me.
:3
Author's Response:Woot!
Got so excited to see the update.
Not dissapointed! Great chapter, made my day <3
Author's Response:Thanks so much!
My Sunday started off crappy but this chapter turned it around for the better. Also, I hope your arm feels better from last weeks covid booster!
I'm kind of hoping for Spike to come back, just for the tad of drama he can create and I'm so curious as to how Willow is gonna react when she finds out, I'm also curious to see how this whole ordeal between Faith and Buffy is gonna unfold!! Ggrrr arghh...so much good in this story. Thaaaank you thaaaank you!!
Author's Response:Thank you! My arm is all better!
Spike will be back actually. He has a role to play still...
Well that was the hottest thing ever!
The line about Faith's cunt making itself known in case she hadn't noticed how much wetness it has contributed is brilliant!
You're a great writer, it's inspiring.
Author's Response:Haha, thank you so much! I did not think a line about someone's cunt would be that impactful.
Ok, just read 3 chapeters.
LOVe that Buffy tripped over the LA club.
Love that [for a change] Buffy is not totally oblivious, and is to some extent taking the lead.Love that she;s nervous and unsure, but also not getting in her own damned way ,like: Original series, and 95% of all fics. Incuding mine. :P
Nice sex scene too. Very real. Perfect blend of loving, horny, and nervous.
Please please please tell me that later chapters invole Buffy setting Tara up with Willow, and a certain amount of confession at the La :)
Author's Response:Thank you!! And I cannot reveal what may or may not occur in later chapters. :p
Not gonna even lie, I've been refreshing this page all weekend waiting for the update
Was definitely worth the wait for this chapter!
I can't even imagine how long it took you to write this but thank you for the hard work!
Author's Response:Aww thank you! That's so nice. :) Sorry I was a bit late! (Got a COVID booster and my arm was deceased so it made being on the laptop very unpleasant). I don't think it actually took me too long to write it, believe it or not haha. Sometimes I'm quick. But mostly not lol.
I knew something was going to interrupt them! lol
Mostly because you are amazing at building up the tension.
So happy you're working on this fic. Look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:Thank you!! :)
Lol...I love that I'm so awkward, I was so jittery when they were on the couch. It was like watching a tennis match and just waiting to see who was going to do the smash.
Author's Response:Hahah. Good, then it came acrross well!
I'm so happy that you're still writing, and that you know how to capture the characters. Even characters such as Oz and Xander, it just really wraps it up all nice and tight.
I can't say how many times I burst out smiling our giggling, this was so good and I can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response:Thanks so much! :)