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Crashing Down by Asher

Rated: Everyone starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

"Whenever your world starts crashing down, that's where you'll find me." The portal is closed and to all who knew her, Buffy Summers is dead. But for Buffy, the real adventure is just beginning when she wakes up in a world not unlike the one she left behind.


Category: Season > Season 5, Relationship > Buffy/Faith, Relationship > Other Ships, Relationship > Other Ships > Willow/Tara
Characters: Anya Jenkins, Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Spike, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Word count: 20365 | Read count: 72385 | Published: 08/11/2013 | Updated: 02/26/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/27/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Down the Rabbit Hole

I like the start to this! Buffy's all confused about what's going on but I like the fact that she doesn't completely go off on Faith. It's nice that they are civil to each other and that Faith gives her the rundown on everyone.

I think my favorite part is that Buffy didn't like that Faith didn't call her B. 

Definitely looking forward to more chapters since I think I missed this one the first time around. :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/27/2014 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting the Alters

The interaction between Buffy and Faith is so enjoyable in this chapter. I like how easily they talk to each other. There's no misunderstandings or anything.

I love how Willow reacted to a different dimension Buffy and it was awesome that the first thing they did together was to scare Xander. It's great to read that they are accepting of her.

Definitely looking forward to reading more. I love how Faith and Buffy are getting along. :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/28/2014 Title: Chapter 3: Paying Respects

Wow, Buffy visiting her old house and then her grave was fantastic! It really showed some of her feelings about the fact she's alive when the other Buffy didn't get the chance to have someone revive her. I like that she has a little guilt over it. It's very in character.

It's fun to read how the scoobs just accept her as one of the gang and even gossip a little. I love Willow's take on Faith's relationship, too.

Really enjoyed this chapter!



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/28/2014 Title: Chapter 4: No Hurry For Home

I like that Buffy is honest with everyone about the fact that she likes where she is. She could've always lied but she didn't. I actually like how all of them aren't hiding anything huge.

Love that Buffy has an attraction to Faith that she hasn't admitted to herself yet. Very enjoyable read! :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/28/2014 Title: Chapter 5: Feelings Of Oddness

Nothing like a little awkwardness to start the day! Both on the dream side and that Buffy wakes up to Faith and Carly almost having a little morning sex.

It's interesting that it feels like Faith knows Buffy has a thing for her but won't say it. Can't wait until someone says it! :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/28/2014 Title: Chapter 6: Who Are You?

Ha, ha! Embarrassing moments always happen with Buffy!

I like that she's not in denial about what she feels but that dream definitely made it confusing for her. Good for Tara for trying to help. :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 03/01/2014 Title: Chapter 7: Patefacio Luminis

Love the shared dream with Buffy and her Faith. Very interesting detail that the shared dreams can go across dimensions and that Faith is really the voice of reason. I like that she made the point that maybe Buffy is needed in her own dimension.

Can't wait to read more, especially with that little clue Faith gave.



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The Girl from Away by aliceinwonderbra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 251]
Summary:

Buffy kisses Faith one last time and jumps into Glory's portal. She's prepared to die but instead wakes up in a strange new world. This is the companion to Flowers for a Ghost and tells the story of what happened to the Buffy from that universe.


Category: Season > Season 5, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Angel, Anya Jenkins, Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Spike, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Flowers for a Ghost
Chapters: 15 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 76871 | Read count: 80159 | Published: 08/14/2013 | Updated: 07/07/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 08/14/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chapter 1

Excellent start!

 

I really like the pace in this chapter.  It feels like I've gotten up to speed on everything right along with Buffy.  It's interesting how she reacts to everything.  She keeps it together even though she really wants to find Faith and seems a little lost without her.  That is one tough slayer.

 

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! :) I wondered if it felt too rushed, but most people will have read Flowers and there's no need to play out the same scenarios over and over.

It's interesting that you say "tough" to describe her. When this was being beta'd that was the same comment I got, that Buffy was coming across very strong. I don't think I did it consciously. I just wanted her to be on par with the awesomeness of Alt Faith, and she came out as very together and in control. She'll have her moments though. She definitely is a little lost without Faith, as you said. :(



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 08/23/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Okay, I read this when you sent it to me but finally have a chance to review. :)

 

I love that Buffy is set on seeing and talking to Faith, even though Willow tries to convince her not to. It shows her strength in that she's sticking to what she wants and she feels for Faith. Faith's reactions to everything felt very authentic, especially with how she reacts to this new Buffy.

 

Can't wait for the next chapter! I just really enjoy Buffy's reactions to all the people in this new-to-her dimension. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Buffy is definitely her own person and not going to be bowed over by what the others here want  I'm glad Faith felt in character. In a way the other story was easier to write because Buffy's distrust was so strong. Faith's feelings are more subtle and harder to pick apart. :p



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 08/30/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The scene with the whole gang was just fantastic! It was great that especially Tara stood strong about her opinion with the spell. It felt like her words were key in the decision. Of course, Dawn was so moving. Loved her interaction with Buffy and that she didn't want to lose her again.

I don't know why Buffy's strength keeps surprising me but it does. I just love her strength, especially when it comes to Faith. No one's opinion changes how she feels about her and I love Faith's reaction to hearing the Buffy was in a relationship with Faith in the other dimension. "A little bit gay?" Loved it! 

 

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! :)

Tara should have been more firm with Willow on the show, I think, so I wanted to give her the opportunity to do it now. Poor Dawn is really having a terrible year, between finding out she's the key, almost dying, losing her mom, etc. If she's got a choice, I don't see how she'd be willing to let Buffy go, knowing it's dangerous and she could be left alone. :(

Buffy should ask Faith more about that little bit gay thing... ;)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 09/06/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So my boss keeps looking at me because I'm reading this on my phone and it's very clear I'm not working... so worth it! :)

 

I was wondering if Faith would point out that she's not the Faith Buffy loves. Their argument was so realistic! It makes me wonder if Buffy's going to back off and not be as insistent with her on what good she could do on the outside. 

 

The fact Buffy is very strong willed about her feelings for Faith is so great to read. The way she stood up to all of them shows the strength she needs to make it in this new dimension without Faith. Even though how Willow refuses to see Buffy's side in going to the prison makes me want to dislike her, it's so true to her character that I just can't. 

 

Great job on this chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Lol, please don't get fired! Read secretly, like I do. :p

I dislike Willow, in canon and here, haha. To be fair though, she did lose canon Buffy, and she doesn't really understand Alt Buffy yet, and she does have legitimate reasons to dislike Faith. I don't think she's totally wrong in her points, although she presents them in a terrible way that doesn't help anyone. 

I think next chapter should answer your questions about how they handle their argument going forward. :)

Thank you for the feedback! :)



Author's Response:

Lol, please don't get fired! Read secretly, like I do. :p

I dislike Willow, in canon and here, haha. To be fair though, she did lose canon Buffy, and she doesn't really understand Alt Buffy yet, and she does have legitimate reasons to dislike Faith. I don't think she's totally wrong in her points, although she presents them in a terrible way that doesn't help anyone. 

I think next chapter should answer your questions about how they handle their argument going forward. :)

Thank you for the feedback! :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 09/13/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This definitely wasn't what I was expecting but it's a good surprise. :)

I like that they left each other alone over that period of time. It seemed lke they both needed that time apart, especially Buffy. She needed that time to realize her Faith is really gone. Buffy's reaction to what happened in LA is so realistic. She shows she still cares no matter what.

Very interesting big bad, Amy. Looking forward to see where you take this! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it! Buffy definitely needed that time to deal with the reality of her situation, I agree.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 09/20/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think my favorite part about this chapter was Faith and Willow's time together. It was slightly awkward but there wasn't any yelling or accusations. They eve somewhat worked together which was an added bonus.

Having Faith at the house seems to be good for Buffy, too. It's great that at least Tara notices. In her own dimension Faith was her rock so maybe she'll fit that role again in some way.

Really like that they have all these new creatures to deal with. Looking forward to the next chapter to read how they deal with the burnbugs! :)



Author's Response:

Hmm, it's interesting that you read F/W interactions as sort of positive. I guess it didn't feel that positive to me when writing it. I was going for a, Willow still hates her, but she's resigned to her presence, so not going to fly off the handle. She's just mostly going to ignore her. Haha.

Tara sees all. :) Tara has fulfilled some of that Buffy rockness in this dimension, especially with Willow living elsewhere, but Faith can only improve things.

Thank you!!!



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 09/27/2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

First, yay for fuffy! :) Also, really loved that they kept it at going slow. Buffy showed some good sense in not going further even though it seemed like Faith was willing to go further. 

The burnbugs are very interesting and I'm curious at what else Amy throws at them. Loved that Faith saved Buffy even while getting stung. All I thought was "aw, she really cares!" 

Can't wait to read what's next! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I second the yay for fuffy! They've had two years apart, so why rush it now? 

To Buffy and to Tara, Faith saving her is meaningful and illustrates how good she is deep down, but of course Faith would give herself no credit. :( Credit to Spike, although he was skulking about, haha. 

 



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 10/04/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Definitely a lot of action in this one!

It's perfectly reasonable for Willow to not have gotten over the loss of her Buffy but using the spell? Bad Willow! It makes sense that her and Tara don't live together after that. How she reacts to Faith makes even more sense now.

I really like Dawn here. She's honest but comforting at the same time. And Buffy and Faith together are very cute! I like that they haven't jumped into anything too serious yet either. It increases the cuteness factor. :)

Great chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) She doesn't live with Tara also because Tara lives in Buffy's house. :P And Buffy probably doesn't want her living there after oh, sending her soul out of her body. Kind of an annoying thing for a roommate to do. :p

Dawn's an annoying ahem, a good egg. :) She just wants Buffy to be happy.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 10/11/2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That conversation Buffy had with Spike was interesting. I like that Buffy cares more for Faith than she does for herself but she takes it further by telling someone to choose Faith. Really liked it.

Loved the fight! I don't think I've read many stories where Tara is as strong as you write her so it's very refreshing to read. She is stronger than she knows and I love that Faith sees that in her. I wonder if the events of the fight will steer Willow to have at least a tiny bit better view of Faith. She was part of the rescue team and all.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) unfortunately I don't have the next one ready yet, so it's going to be a bit longer until posting. :( 

Tara is awesome! She didn't choose to use magic as freely as Willow, but she had been practicing a long time and had a lot of knowledge. I think when push comes to shove, she can hold her own. Especially for Willow. :) 

Perhaps Willow may lighten up in future now. :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 11/12/2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, that was an amazingly cute first date! The flowers, the nervousness, the go cart racing and especially the end... just cute!

This Buffy is really wise beyond her years. She's much better at reading people and reacting to what's happening without freaking out. Really loved how she talked to Faith when Faith put a stop to what they were doing. It shows a great deal of maturity.

So many little funny moments in this chapter. I was wondering how'd you use Marcie but I love her character here. Love all her comments with Faith!

Can't wait to read what's next! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hooray for schmoop.  And hooray for reasonable, has actual communication skills Buffy. :D

I love Marcie too! I actually have an untold story of Marcie's background rattling around my brain, which I will hopefully write and publish later. Funny how minor characters suck you in. 



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 11/25/2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I want to hope that Willow's telling the truth.

I like that Faith is willing to hear Willow out. It's always great to read when Faith goes for a gut feeling, even if it might be an unpopular opinion. It does make me wonder how Buffy will react to the choice she made.

Very interested in what's going to happen next! :)



Author's Response:

Buffy will definitely have some thoughts on that, lol. :D Thank you, ma'am! Sadly my next chapter is languishing, but on the upside I'm moving into a banging new apartment, so... we can be happy about that, right? Hayley? Why are you picking up those tomatoes? :p



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/15/2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yay for a new chapter! And it was definitely worth the weight!

First, great interaction between Willow and Faith about being judged on their pasts. It felt like a conversation that needed to happen with them in order for there to be any common ground.

I love Buffy's concern for Faith throughout the chapter. It's really what Faith needed especially once the clothes started to come off. Really liked how Buffy knew exactly what Faith needed to hear from her.

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

That Buffy is pretty great, eh? :) Unlike say... Willow. D: Am I detecting some Willow positivity from you, Hayley? Willow hate is a must for all readers of this fic. We must be united in our detest for her! :)

Buffy does say the right thing, but I think Faith's also matured in her time in prison. She can hear and accept love from other people with much more ease than she ever did before. So it's easier for all involved. :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 06/02/2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow! So much happened in this chapter!

I love how close Buffy and Faith are in this chapter. They really show a united front in making the decisions, even teaming up against Giles. It was great to read.

I have so many questions now! All of them seem to be in immediate danger and my mind keeping going over who might not survive. Also curious about what's going on with evil Willow.

Can't wait to read more! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I loved that scene with Giles because this is a place where Buffy and Faith really get each other, when no one else, including the other versions of themselves, could. Buffy hasn't confided in anyone else here that she killed Finch, but the shared experience of being slayers who've taken human lives really bonds her with Faith. Faith is the only one who senses her grief at the idea of doing it again, and she responds to it by leaping to Buffy's defense. Gotta love her for it. Not that I think Giles was wrong to bring it up, because he has valid points also. 

More will be up soon I hope!! :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 06/24/2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

First, I loved the part where we get a glimpse of Amy's life as a rat. I'd always kind of wondered about that and especially liked the part with the kitten. The whole thing shows why she has an attachment to Willow.

I didn't think I would but I like Faith's belief in Willow, even when everyone else has doubts. It shows how much Faith has grown because she really could just take Buffy's side. 

Only one more chapter? Sad! Can't wait to read how it ends! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I think Faith knows what it's like to have no one believe you can be better, and she sympathizes with that. At the same time, she's also backing up Tara, because Tara believes in Willow absolutely, and Faith trusts Tara's instincts. I think it's really good for Faith that she can be vocal about her own instincts and have them be respected. Buffy believes in her so much that it helps her believe in herself. 

Yep, just one more to wrap up the loose ends and answer some fuffy questions... :) 



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 07/07/2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yay for a happy ending! For a second I thought Faith would just back to prison and Buffy would be alone. So happy that wasn't the case. :)

It was interesting that the turning point for Faith changing her mind about prison was Lorne listening to her sing. Really enjoyed that! Then again, I loved every chapter of this one.

Can't wait to read anything else you come up with for these characters. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Hayley! :)  I did toy with the idea of Faith going back to prison for at least a while, but I felt like the two of them deserved a good end after I almost killed Faith and melted Buffy's eyes. :D I knew Angel had to be involved in Faith's decision because she looks up to him so much. Lorne's part just kind of happened but I was happy because I love Lorne. :) I hope I will do those couple of one-shots soon, but some other things are peaking my interest, so these may go on the back burner. :p We shall see!



Just A Fool by invalid_reality

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Something light and fun and fluffy! Set six years post-Chosen


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Andrew Wells, Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Kennedy, Rupert Giles, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 99737 | Read count: 22983 | Published: 08/15/2013 | Updated: 11/09/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 11/18/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have a soft spot for first person fics and I think this one is one of my favorites. Faith shows such emotion and conflict in deciding to go to Cleveland. Loved how she was introduced to all parts of the facility, too.

Such a great start! :)



Potential by Dylan


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Buffy gets to grips with some surprising changes as the potential slayers invade her house. We settle into season 7 very loosely; canon goes out of the window as I mix up some past events and their outcomes.


Category: Season > Season 7, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Action, PWP, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 50189 | Read count: 16105 | Published: 08/31/2013 | Updated: 08/31/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 09/05/2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You know, I started reading this during a power outage at work yesterday and then couldn't stop. It really is one of my favorite fics to reread so thank you for posting it here. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, H :) It was fun to write. 



Date Night 2 by lizardmm

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Buffy's been fighting evil since she was a teen. Now, resettled in Cleveland, pregnant, and in a stable relationship with the only other person who can understand her completely, this should be the part of the story where she gets her happy ending. Right?


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Kennedy, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Date Nights
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 40590 | Read count: 14365 | Published: 09/08/2013 | Updated: 11/11/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/29/2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Choosing Sides

Yay! Very happy you've updated this story! :)

It's interesting that they're on opposite sides again, even if they don't realize it. Both of their positions are understandable so I'm curious at what will happen if they meet while on opposite sides. Also curious if The First knows Faith is there. It feels like that might be yes.

Can't wait to read more of Buffy's interaction with her daughter, too! Hope the next chapter shows up soon! :)



Author's Response:

an update! hooray!

i'm curious what will happen if they meet while fighting for the other team, too.  do you know how it's all going to end?  because if you do, tell me - i have no idea :)  and no worries, i'm 1800 words into the next chapter, so time between updates won't be so protracted 

thanks for sticking with this story, Hayley!