The Chosen Two Archive
A Buffy/Faith Fanfiction Community

The Chosen Two Archives

BROWSE BY:

Relationship [279]
Season [232]
Character
Genre

Archive Links:

Twitter
Awards
Tumblr
Links

Site Info

Members: 1539
Series: 20
Stories: 290
Chapters: 1551
Word count: 7910064
Authors: 59
Reviews: 2554
Reviewers: 156
Newest Member: evesock
 

Search





User Profile: Hayley [Contact]

Real name:
Gender: lady
Member since: 07/16/2013
Beta-reader:
Bio:

[Report This]
Series by Hayley [0]
Stories by Hayley [26]
Favorite Series [0]
Hayley's Favorites [0]


Reviews by Hayley


Wishing Changes Everything by declan4


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Part 1 of the 'Wishing' Saga. A wish at Faith's bedside sends Buffy back in time to Faith's arrival in Sunnydale. Can Buffy change things for the better between the two of them? And what, ultimately, will be the price?


Category: Season > Season 3, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Angel, Buffy Summers, Cordelia Chase, Daniel Osbourne (Oz), Faith Lehane, Joyce Summers, Rupert Giles, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 164196 | Read count: 80357 | Published: 12/02/2013 | Updated: 04/24/2014 | Latest Chapter

[Report This]


Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/17/2014 Title: Chapter 6: Homecoming: Part 1 (The Dead And The Dumped)

I was wondering how Scott was going to break up with her. It's fun to read how you're weaving the old scenes in with Buffy's new timeline. Her new attitude towards Faith is adding some great scenes to the chapters.

Great job! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Scott was always gonna dump her, even if she wasn't still hung up on Angel. Buffy just isn't destined for normalness- that's why we love her!

Added fuffy-ness makes any episode better in my opinion!



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/17/2014 Title: Chapter 7: Homecoming: Part 2 (Sex, Lies And Mr. Gordo)

Loved the sleepover! Very cool to see Buffy be more open with Faith about what happened with Angel. It seems like that would help their friendship.

Really liked Joyce in this chapter, too. She seems to be the mother figure Faith might need later. Definitely keeping me interested with this one!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the sleepover stuff was hard, kind of nerve-wrecking because it was a completly new scene. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I think I got Faith's reactions about right, she always seems very down-to-earth when it comes to all the mysticl soap-opera stuff.

And I always like writing Joyce, and she and Faith will have some nice interactions during the Christmas ep- coming soon...



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/17/2014 Title: Chapter 8: Homecoming: Part 3 (Dressed To Kill Or Be Killed)

Wow, kissing! I half expected Buffy to react like she did, especially given she's not used to those feelings. Looks like she hurt things with Faith though.

Loved all the fighting in this chapter, too! A fun read!



Author's Response:

Buffy kisses girl, Buffy freaks, it kinda has to go that way in my opinion, at least at this point. But then again I think the only girl she would kiss at this stage of her life would be Faith, because of their connection.

But part of Buffy can't forget 'evil Faith', so I guess she has a real reason to freak on that occasion.

 

I do like writing the action stuff, a nice change of pace- glad you like.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/17/2014 Title: Chapter 9: Revelations: Part 1 (Evil Is The Watcher-Word)

It seems Buffy is making good positive moves in getting Faith to trust her, like being more open about all things Angel, but her feelings are complicating it. Definitely some drama there!

I'm curious how Post is going to complicate things. Good chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Buffy's messy feelings for Angel will still be an issue in the coming chapters, even while she's exploring her feelings with Faith. Hence drama and complexity!

Ooh, that Post. *shakes fist*

Again, thanks for the feedback.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/17/2014 Title: Chapter 10: Revelations: Part 2 (The Magic Mitten And Other Important Stuff)

Wow! When Buffy and Angel kissed I had a feeling someone was spying. It makes sense that it would be Faith this time around. The jealousy ups the drama.

Very interested in what happens next!! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, you can get a lot of drama out of bad timing, I learned that from Buffy. And poor jealous, confused, defensive Faith...



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/17/2014 Title: Chapter 11: Revelations: Part 3 (Post-Slayer Depression)

Yay for kissing and finally some common ground! :)

i love how Buffy really refuses to give up on Faith and forces her to think more of her situation. Really enjoyed how her talk with Giles went as well.

Very curious about what a date with them will be like. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yeah, after the last chapter I think we could all deal with a little happiness!

The scenes between Giles and Buffy and Faith and Buffy were easily my favourite to write, and probably the most rewarding too (very cathartic...)

Anyway, looks like you're all caught up!

Thank you so much for commenting on each chapter and pointing out what you liked, I'm amazingly, embarrassingly grateful!

Fuffy forever!



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/24/2014 Title: Chapter 12: Lover's Walk (First Date Jitters)

Buffy is really using her knowledge to her benefit. Well, to the benefit of a lot of them. I like that she was able to sort out her college issues right away. Definitely helped her with Faith.

At least Spike's presence solved the problem of a possible love triangle. He definitely pointed out the problem Faith and Angel had with each other, regardless of what they said.

Great chapter! Can't wait for a fuffy Christmas! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Buffy had sort of resolved her college issues already so I didn't want to dwell, if she hadn't gotten involved with Faith it might've been a different story.

Yeah, Spike was there to cut through the bull yet again, and this time I had Angel do the cutting off, because he's the one who's come to the realisation first.

Fuffy Christmas is like real Christmas, only better!



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/04/2014 Title: Chapter 14: Amends: Part 2 (First Things...Second)

Wow, for a minute I thought Faith would just stake Angel. She must really trust Buffy's reasoning for wanting him around and of course, she must have some strong feelings for Buffy, too.

I really like how you've set up everything for Buffy to defeat the First and I enjoyed the little warning it gave her. Definitely means more problems to come, right?

I hoped Buffy would be honest with Giles but I suppose the revelation will happen eventually. Great chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, what I was going for was the discussion Buffy and Faith had the night earlier got Faith thinking- why is this guy worth it? Also about the 'choice' to do evil or good which is touched on in the series. But a lot of this is because she loves Buffy and for that reason didn't hurt Angel.

Oh, yes- a big plot hint that may sort of get resolved in the short term, but will have long term repercussions (he, he cryptic...)

The Buffy/Giles stuff will be explored much more fully in 'Helpless' and 'The Zeppo' both of which I'm working on now.

Thank you again- eagerly awaiting more 'Tricked' (...which is kind of a similar idea- only it's Faith who knows the truth. Huh, very cool)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/09/2014 Title: Chapter 15: Amends: Part 3 (The Gift That Keeps On Giving)

Wow, Faith was really confident in getting Buffy that present!  And she even used it in front of her.  I wasn't expecting that but it was a nice surprise.  :)

I love that Faith finally had a good Christmas and that it wasn't just Buffy that tried to make it that way.  It was great to see that Joyce really played a part in that, too.

Really enjoyed the use of Faith's backstory, too.  I was just paging through 'Go Ask Malice' yesterday while doing some writing of my own so it was fun to see you use it.  

Very enjoyable chapter!  Can't wait to read what comes next!  :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Faith doesn't see sex as a big thing- I guess that might mean she's open to, um, unusual presents!

And I imagine Faith probably had her best Christmas (maybe she had a couple of good ones when she was really young and her Dad was still around, who knows?). And having seen how welcoming Joyce was in that short scene in 'Amends' I always imagine she would be a big part of any good experience- I'm glad you liked!

 

I got 'Go Ask Malice' for Christmas and I love it. It makes you feel for her character so much because you know about all the badness to come...but you also she her potential to be something really great and special. Just like Buffy.

 

Thank you for your thoughts! I love reading them.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 02/20/2014 Title: Chapter 17: Helpless: Part 2 (What's Right About This Passage Again?)

Oh, so sad! 

The way Faith reacts is completely understandable given her trust issues but part of me was begging her to just listen to Buffy. At least she'll still trust Joyce. I hope anyway.

I'm surprised Travers managed to get out of that library without getting punched. Both of them had an amazing amount of restraint. And injuries, too.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Better times for Buffy and Faith, perhaps?



Author's Response:

Yeah, Faith is really hurting, that's for sure. And her walls have gone back up, but they're not as strong as before. Maybe there's some hope for Buffy!

Travers got out because of the two girls being pretty injured mostly! If Faith had still had her abilities...he might've been in serious danger.

'The Zeppo''s turning into a pretty big chapter, and not at all like the actual episode- the focus is kind of on our two slayers and the apocolypse (Faith's first!)

Thanks for the thoughts, always interested in what you have to say!



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 03/02/2014 Title: Chapter 18: The Zeppo (Not The End Of The World)

Joyce is so wise!  It feels like she might know there's something else going on but I do love that she decided to take Faith's side in order to make sure Faith knew someone cared.

It was interesting that Angel is one of the ones that gives Buffy the advice she needs to make up with Faith.  He essentially told her to make sure Faith knew Buffy's true feelings and I loved that.

Faith came through in the end and they said they love each other.  Now I wonder how Bad Girls is going to end up.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, this is certainly Joyce's moment. Her bonding with Faith certainly came to the fore. Their was probably some tears and cuddling off screen...

A lot of people know that Angel can be jealous of Buffy's love interests. But he can also be noble (has been to both Buffy and Cordy) and Mr. Do-the-right-thing. So I thought that he might give some advice. I think generally that he likes Faith by this point, which may've helped. Hence the sound advice.

Yeah, the love stuff...I thought it was appropriate for Buffy to say it. If she feels it she says it. Faith is a little more shy, but she's got big soppy feelings for Buffy. We'll see more of that in the next chapter.

Thanks for the feedback, welcome as always.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 03/09/2014 Title: Chapter 19: Bad Girls: Part 1 (Sugar And Spice)

You know, I don't know if I've said this before but I really like how you're weaving the timeline of the season into your own. It fits so well!

Really enjoyed the back and forth between the two about what should happen the first time they'll be together. It's fun how Buffy goes from nervous to excited and back again.

Can't wait for the second part! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! To be fair the 'weaving' is part writing-crutch on my part, helps me formulate the scene/dialogue in my mind. It also helps to construct the overall story. Glad you like it.

Well, wouldn't Faith make you nervous and/or excited? I'm glad you find it keeping with Buffy's character, although I think she might get over her nerves very soon...

Thanks for the (always much appreciated) feedback.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 03/19/2014 Title: Chapter 20: Bad Girls: Part 2 (First Time For Everything)

Wow, that was definitely hot! :)

I really enjoyed how Faith acted in this chapter. So caring and loving, definitely the perfect match for Buffy right then. What a night for their first time!

I am curious to read how you write what's coming next, especially since Buffy took note of Faith's changing tactics. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I agree, it was kind of steamy!

Yep, slow and steady with Faith means Buffy has a totally devoted girlfriend. I always thought if Faith was ever actually in love she'd be very sweet and caring. Aww..

We'll just have to see wait and see if Faith has changed enough...



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 03/24/2014 Title: Chapter 21: Bad Girls: Part 3 (Meant To Be)

I almost said those last two words out loud... and I'm at work. Good job at getting that response!

It's fun to read how in love the two of them are at the start of the chapter. Faith trying to cover for their previous night's activities was just cute. They really are a cute couple and now I feel there's some angst to come.

Bring on the angst if it's coming! You write this so well. :)



Author's Response:

Oops! I have to say I've done that myself on occassion.

Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad people like they're 'couple-ness' (?) of them, at least the way I write it.

The cover-up scene actually comes from personal experience. *blush*, you know what they say, write what you know!

 

And, yes their is a lot of angst up ahead, and soon...



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/01/2014 Title: Chapter 22: Bad Girls: Part 4 (The Way It Could Have Gone)

You have no idea how relieved I am that Faith didn't end up killing the deputy mayor. Love that awkward laugh from Buffy, too. It seemed like a very realistic response.

Can't wait to see what's to come. I'm interested if they'll actually make that reservation. :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Faith isn't quite so reckless this time round, Finch just got a bit kicked is all.

And I'm glad you found Buffy's awkward laugh realistic- sometimes I find that incredible relief comes out like that.

 

All I'm gonna say is that Buffy and Faith will eventually make it to the Rustic Inn...one day. :-(

 

Thanks for your thoughts!

 

 



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/18/2014 Title: Chapter 24: Consequences: Part 1 (Things Fall Apart)

Oh, no!

I love that Buffy is so comfortable with being intimate with Faith. They really are cute together but I wonder how Faith will react to Buffy's new problem. I can't imagine it'll be good.

Hope to see another chapter soon! :)



Author's Response:

Oh, no indeed!

And just as Buffy was getting so close to Faith...I am so mean.

Though I am glad you found them cute together, that bodes well for the future!

 

Not much good coming the slayers way...

 

Thanks for your imput!



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/24/2014 Title: Chapter 25: Consequences: Part 2 (The Way It Has To Be)

Well, Faith's initial reaction to everything is definitely realistic but I'm happy she had a change of heart and went back to talk to Buffy. It really shows the person she'd become over the course of the redo year. At least she believed that Buffy loved her.

Really loved the fact that Faith stuck with her through the spell and that they were able to talk through everything. It makes me sad she had to go back. Well written chapter!



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you. I wrote and rewrote Faith's reaction to the news about three or four times and went with what I thought was the best one. (More angry and betrayed that crying and regretful, which doesn't really fit her character.)

And I really needed her to come back so she and Buffy could 'part' on good terms. Knowing that it was all real for Faith was important.

 

Yeah, Faith sucking it up and helping out with the spell...tough, but I'm glad you liked it!

 

Thanks for your thoughts.



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/24/2014 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue: Graduation Day Part 2

First, I really enjoyed this story from start to finish. It had everything I look for when I'm reading.

This one definitely had a bittersweet ending though and I'm very happy that there might be a sequel. I like that Buffy remembered everything from the spell so she maybe won't make the same mistakes again. I'm very curious at what Faith's reaction will be when she wakes up. 

Again, great story! :)



Author's Response:

Oh thanks! *giddy*

 

Yep, the ending had to be bittersweet, but I'm playing the long game here, It'lll be worth it. (I hope)

This was always Buffy's story. Her remembering everything from the wish is important and will lead to a few character changes in theSeason 4 sequel.

I'm actually quite looking forward to finally writing things from Faith's POV (even if it will be 'evil Faith' to begin with.) and other characters POV as well. Should be a fun challenge (fingers crossed that I don't mess up!)

 

Thank you again. It means the world. :)



Youngstown by Bruteaous


Rated: Mature [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

AU. Two years post-Chosen. Buffy and the Scoobies have centered their slayer organization in Cleveland and Faith thinks she doesn’t need anybody, but will Buffy prove her wrong when their paths cross again? 


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 4976 | Read count: 1395 | Published: 12/29/2013 | Updated: 12/29/2013 | Latest Chapter

[Report This]


Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/02/2014 Title: Chapter 1: City of Rock & Roll

That's an interesting start. I kind of like the fact that Buffy and Faith are living their own separate lives and they don't seem to have changed a whole lot since Sunnydale. You really have the mannerisms down.

Having this new slayer at the school, I'm assuming she's Faith's sister, seems like a good way to get Faith's attention. She also might be a good reminder of Faith for Buffy. 

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)



Just A Fool: A Very Special New Years Eve by invalid_reality

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A little sappy, sexy, happy little one-shot based on the story, Just A Fool...


Category: Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: PWP, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 8752 | Read count: 2551 | Published: 12/31/2013 | Updated: 12/31/2013 | Latest Chapter

[Report This]


Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 01/01/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Happy New Year!

Wow!  It's very refreshing to see Faith making some very adult decisions, like adding to their family and loving family life.  

Of course, the fuffy scenes were very hot!! :)  I love that Buffy was a little upset that Willow knew Faith planned on having another baby before Buffy did.  All kinds of cute.  The whole family is all kinds of cute.

Loved this little one shot!  Sequel?  :)



Author's Response:

I can confirm that yes, the sequel is in the works as of today!

I figured it was due time I wrote something more for JAF before starting a sequel :)

Happy you enjoyed the one-shot all around, and you know me, I really do love writing these kinds of fics, a nice change of pace from plot heavy, angst riddled stories that's for sure ;)



4am by AKLehane

Rated: Everyone starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Faith has a nightmare, and Buffy tries to comfort her. One shot.


Category: Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1232 | Read count: 5006 | Published: 03/13/2014 | Updated: 03/15/2014 | Latest Chapter

[Report This]


Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 03/16/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a nice fic!

I like how strong willed Buffy is when it came to really get Faith to talk about what was bothering her. Loved all the reassurances. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)



Sweet Tyranny by Electra

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Past Featured Story

From friends with benefits to just friends, Buffy and Faith find that calling it quits isn't exactly as easy as it sounds.  Post-Chosen.

 


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 9262 | Read count: 8363 | Published: 04/18/2014 | Updated: 04/18/2014 | Latest Chapter

[Report This]


Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/18/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Tyranny

I loved it!

It's always a nice ending when Buffy comes to her senses and realizes that she wants to be with Faith and not anyone else. Also really enjoyed Faith telling Buffy exactly how she felt and then backed off. So grown up of her!

I don't care which fic you work on next as long as there's something else to be posted soon! I need something to read while pretending to supervise. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks you, Hayley!  I'm a sucker for a grown up Faith.  Especially when Buffy realizes how badly she wants her.  :D

I'll keep writing so long as my muse is around.  Not sure what's next but I'll keep hammering away until the words run out.  :p  Thanks for reading!!  :)



A Thousand Miles of Broken Arrows by invalid_reality

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Buffy's been gone for five years without a single word, but her reappearance will become the least of their worries as they face yet another big bad that threatens to pull their entire world apart...


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 18 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 80573 | Read count: 15236 | Published: 04/21/2014 | Updated: 07/09/2014 | Latest Chapter

[Report This]


Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/26/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the start of this one!  It's interesting that the start is that Faith is essentially hiding Buffy's whereabouts from everyone.  It really shows how much she cares for her in spite of the fact Buffy left everything.

Now I want to know what will happen once they arrive in Cleveland.  Update soon!  :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 04/28/2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, great chapter!

I think my favorite part was that Buffy had the courage to send that email to Dawn. It feels that it took a lot to send it and that she was able to admit that she's in love with Faith. Love that Dawn was so matter of fact about it, too.

Sounds like the twists and turns are just getting started. Can't wait for more! :)



Reviewer: Hayley Signed
Date: 05/08/2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow!  I love how close Faith and Buffy are and that they're so open to admit their feelings for each other.  And it was all very hot!!

I'm very curious about what's going to happen now that Tarek Yareli will go after Buffy and Faith and no one knows where they are.  Can't wait for the next chapter!