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The Girl from Away by aliceinwonderbra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 251]
Summary:

Buffy kisses Faith one last time and jumps into Glory's portal. She's prepared to die but instead wakes up in a strange new world. This is the companion to Flowers for a Ghost and tells the story of what happened to the Buffy from that universe.


Category: Season > Season 5, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Angel, Anya Jenkins, Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Spike, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Flowers for a Ghost
Chapters: 15 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 76871 | Read count: 79990 | Published: 08/14/2013 | Updated: 07/07/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: topak Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Faith should have thrown those cups full of coffee at Amy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Damnit Faith. Why didn't you even try scalding that bitch?

I'm loving the strange friendship that's developing between Marcy and Faith. Marcy's brattiness is a compliment to Faith's brashness. As much as Willow and faith developed some form of understanding last chapter, Willow will always be Buffy's friend.

The whole time Amy was making those unicorn fart under her robe, I was half-expecting for her to open her robe and expose herself. *i know I have a weird and perverted brain. But it was a weird thing to see someone in a robe!!!

Ok *breathes in and out. Now my fever is back again.

There's so much happening in this chapter. Aside from the action-filled last section (which is still bothering me cause it's a complete fuck-fest of failure!), them arguing whether or not they should kill Amy was the best part. I have no problem voting for Amy's death, but yeah... No one knows how much killing a human affected both Buffy and Faith, except for Buffy and Faith.

OMG that ending?!?! What the heck!!!

Author's Response:

Did you want Faith to be touched by the unicorn farts? Lol! She couldn't get close. Amy was wearing a dress, not a robe. She was wearing a very slowly dress with layers, so she was gathering the layers and releasing the bugs. 

I love Marcie too! She's good comic relief and she has a unique skill set in that people can't see her. She is good with Faith. Hopefully you'll like that one shot of her. :p Assuming I write it.

What's interesting about the discussion of killing Amy is that no one other than Faith actually knows that Buffy also killed Finch. It's not something she would want to talk about. So Giles doesn't know how his suggestion is eating her up, but Faith sees it instantly.  



Reviewer: topak Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/24/2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I loved Buffy's funny, rambling thoughts. I find her adorable when she's like that. She hasn't lost her sense of humor even though she's in a really messed-up situation. But running alone all by herself... -_-

In the end, she ended up in the same place as the gang. Hahahaha! That really made me laugh. With a bit of relief. Cause really?

Faith died? Does that mean there is another awakened slayer somewhere? Faith died?!?! I didn't know that happened. What?!?! Ok. She's alive now, but really! Faith died?!?!

The way they handled the possessed Sunnydale residents: I liked how you were mindful of them as still being humans as opposed to zombies. And the random injection of Faith's thoughts about Buffy not approving of her breaking people's kneecaps. Haha. These little things do matter and are very much appreciated.

About the setting: while reading through this chapter and the previous one, I am reminded of Pans' Labyrinth. Have you seen that movie? The images painted you painted in my head is this fantasy world, dark and scary, yet fascinating and magical. Did I mention creepy? You do have a knack for coming up with interesting environments. I love your imagination more than the real you *kidding.

I was trying to figure out how this whole debacle would end. I thought Willow was a lost cause, but that can't be. Because, TARA (and Faith's faith on Willow). I am relieved that the whole thing was not resolved by the death of Amy (or Buffy or Faith doing something drastic and action packed). That would have been copping out (sorta).

That Amy-as-a-rat section really got me sad. I didn't try to reread it cause it sorta threw me for a loop. You know how much of a softie I can be. Also, gullible. It was sad though... really. But in the end, she did end up being evil and vengeful. I wonder what will happen to her after this. I still am reminded of Amy-rat waiting for Willow's return. What sadness and loneliness feels like. I blame you for my sadness!!!

This chapter was looong, and full of details. No wonder you were complaining to me so much. You put a lot of effort into it. I am proud and happy for you. I won't tease you so much (but you have to remind me!!!). *hugs

I did miss the lack of fuffy. *oops here I am complaining again. heh.

Author's Response:

Always a complaint with you, eh? *flicks your horns* Buffy's humor is one of my fave qualities about her too. :)

Yes, a new slayer was called. But that's a story for another day. :D I haven't seen Pan's Labyrinth, no. But if my imagination is on par with a movie, I'll take the compliment, haha. I was debating what to do with Amy. I thought perhaps they'd make her a rat again, but it seemed quite cruel, especially given the rat scene I ended up writing. I thought it was best to just defeat her and hand her off to some other authority. 

I thought Amy was a much better villain than say, The Trio from the show. I tried to give her some understandable motivation. She was a basically decent person, but she went a little mad in her time as a rat. I did love writing that rat scene. Poor little thing. Enough details for Topak?? I can't believe it. :p



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 07/07/2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I really felt bad when I read that Marcy can't be checked by the doctors cause she's invisible. That made me wonder about the rest of the things that she can't do. You've made her likeable in her annoying way hahaha. I wish she didn't have to leave.

And speaking of leaving... Haaaaaaaa!!!! Faith decided to go back to prison. I didn't expect that! And then she goes on and says, "I hope you find someone who gives you everything..."

I've used up that line before, and I know how much it hurts to say it. I wanted to smack her and cry at the same time.

Thank goodness you fixed that mess up. Thank you Lorne!!!

Author's Response:

Likeable in an annoying way... Sounds like I based her on someone I know. >:) 

Told ya I had to make you cry before I could bring it to the happy ending! I think it was important that Buffy let her make her own choice and support her in that. That made Faith more secure in her feeling that Buffy sees her for herself and respects her. I do love Lorne, and he is a person who so loves love. Of course he's gonna speak up and tell her to run, not walk, toward the one who loves her. :) happy I finally have you an unequivocally happy ending? 



Is Death Her Gift? by Bruteaous


Rated: Teen starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

What if Faith had been sent to collect Dana in “Damages” instead of Andrew? Buffy/Faith.


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 9107 | Read count: 23366 | Published: 08/19/2013 | Updated: 08/22/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Date: 08/26/2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Human Slayer

Angst! I'm not really a fan of it because it makes me unhappy. Haha.

Darn I hate Giles for forcing Faith to go ahead with this mission. Suck it up? Not a very Giles thing to say. Makes me want to kick him in between the legs. Why can't he get other people to reel in the really bad ones? Why does Faith have to go through this torture alone?

*inhales and prepares for more angst ahead*



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 08/26/2013 Title: Chapter 2: What's Your Childhood Trauma?

Intense fight. Why does Faith have to capture Dana by herself again? Poor kid. How did she know about the words spoken by Buffy or Faith? Is she possessed by a demon? Dun dun dun dun... Next chapter! I need to read the answers.



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 08/28/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Gifts & Curses

Ah thank goodness Faith didn't have to kill Dana. Buffy showing up at the right time was perfect.

I still can't figure out how Dana managed to learn about the words spoken by Buffy or Faith. Did I miss it?

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks. Like to think Buffy, as the slayer among slayers, has pretty decent timing in such situations or I would hope anyway. ;) As I gathered from the Angel episode "Damages" where Dana features, she is sort of psychic and has a mental link to all Slayers before and after her. While fighting Spike in the episode, she is able to channel the voices and memories of the two slayers he killed and therefore recognize who he was. I expanded it in this piece to include Kendra, even though she had technically never met Faith and of course Buffy and the rogues that Faith had put down as well as Wesley (I figured that if Dana had a link to all slayers past and previous, there was no reason why she wouldn't have a similiar one to their watchers on account of the shadow men, but I sort of bent the rules because I couldn't help but use Wesley's words about his experience with Faith and have them turned against her). Thanks for reading and glad that yuo enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing as well. :D



Five By Five By Five By... by beergood

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

One day, Faith shows up on Buffy's doorstep. And Faith shows up on Buffy's doorstep. And Faith shows up on Buffy's doorstep. And all of them refuse to leave. Confusing? Don't worry, all shall be explained. Even the abnormally high number of roles played by Eliza Dushku.


Category: Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1409 | Read count: 4672 | Published: 08/24/2013 | Updated: 08/24/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Date: 08/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Five by five by five by...

Hahaha. I was starting to get scared that it was real. Three boorish versions of Faith, walking and messing up Buffy's bachelorette pad... sounds like a nightmare. Then you had to add in the kids. LoL! I did wonder if they'll all have feelings for Buffy.

Wedding jitters. The subconscious is so weird sometimes :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! It definitely is - and Buffy's probably more so than most. :)



Brazilian by beergood

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Needs must when you're stuck in a jungle hunting demons. And that scythe belongs to all Slayers, doesn't it?


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 485 | Read count: 9884 | Published: 08/25/2013 | Updated: 08/25/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: topak Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Brazilian

"Not really. That ever stop you before?"

Lol! How come I just saw this fic. I need to get out more. Err, login here more.

But darn you made me laugh. You're very good with the funny oneshots. Thank you for lifting up my decidedly awful mood. I can imagine Faith's sassy look and tone while she voices out those ALL CAPS sentences.

Great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you!



Seasons by Bobbi

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A Fuffy fic for ABC's Birthday :) :) :)

Set after Season 7. Fuffy do Fuffy things throughout the year.


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 24203 | Read count: 7247 | Published: 09/08/2013 | Updated: 09/08/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Date: 09/13/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

# Spring

OMG Bobbi! Forgive me for the delayed review. I am behind on everything these days. I finally read the story the other day. Aaaaaaah!!! Yes I am extremely flaky right now. I was gushing the whole time that I was reading the story. Gushing and laughing and missing you all together. I wish every month was your friend's birthday. Cause a girl can get used to reading stories like this. *I'd like to think this is life's gift to me, my birthday is next week. Cough.

Have I told you that I loved the story? I think Bikini Fic has a competition here. So does Whirlwind. Hmmm... they don't have to compete. They are independent of each other. And I love them AAAALLLL. Ok, I am getting out of focus. Back to the story.

Why did you publish this as a one-shot? It feels like 4 chapters to me. Aha!!! I will review it per season. How about that? It's because there are so many things to quote here. I was laughing so hard in between the excited, tingly feeling I get whenever I read something fluffy, fuffy. Oh how I've missed your writing and your sense of humour.

Buffy is such an oblivious person. Setting her eyes on smarmy Satsu was a bad idea. But we all make mistakes Buffy. LMAO! Did Xander tell Faith about Buffy's plans? Cause really, he's such a gossip. I love it whenever Faith shows up to save Buffy from her plan to proposition to Satsu. Clocked her she did. No one can beat up the original two. Especially not Faith when she's protecting her territory.

To be continued :) Gotta prepare for my flight!

Author's Response:

Hi, Topak!

Stop being so silly, there's no time period for giving feedback.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY...UPCOMING!!! I hope you have a great time and get lots of presents. And cake :) :) :)

I'm so happy you liked the story! I see what you mean about breaking it down into four chapters, but I was so focused(and excited) that the site would take the whole fic as a one-shot. Boom! It's posted! It's done!

Yeah, Buffy was a little bit...shall we say: "confused"? She finally woke up and smelled the coffee, saw the writing on the wall, saw the Christmas trees for the forest. 

Yep, Xander did place a phone call to Faith to tell her to come home for Yard Clearing Day. They're best buddies and he can't just stand by and watch Buffy ride off with the wrong woman!

There's no crying in baseball and no trying to get between Fuffy. Didn't Satsu even notice I was writing a Fuffy fic? Nowhere does it say anything about this being a Butsu story. She should have known better.

Thanks for the feedback and I hope you have a wonderful trip :) :) :)



Someone Like You by lizardmm, False

Rated: Mature [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

In the aftermath of season 8, both Buffy and Faith are ready to start the next chapter to their separate lives. But when a new Big Bad surfaces, those disparate lives once again merge. How do you move on when you're haunted by a face from your past?


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Angel, Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Kennedy, Satsu, Spike, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Action, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 134122 | Read count: 22293 | Published: 09/03/2013 | Updated: 09/03/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I can already see myself anxiously waiting for Monday to come. And that will be my life for the next few months. *Sigh* I am not pathetic for hanging unto your stories like this, right?

Anyway, back to the review. This first chapter is an intriguing beginning.

I felt sorry for Buffy. Faith's been living in England for over a year, that means Buffy's been struggling financially just as long. I could imagine how humbling it must be to ask for financial support from her friends. And her offering to pay for Faith's tickets is a very generous offer... which makes it all the more heartbreaking if you ask me.

As for Faith, I can see that she's got some feelings for Buffy. Not sure what kind of feelings. But the way she reacted clearly showed she's very much affected by her. And why was she relieved that it wasn't a 'recreational call'?

Which leads us to the HER at the end of the chapter. Is this in any way related to the title of your story? or things being 'complicated'?

Should know by now that's it's pointless to guess what's coming next. I will just have to wait for Monday, and the Monday after that. And the Monday after that. *here we go again... and I love it.*



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Caffeine

Like i said, I had to pause every 2 paragraphs while reading this. How come i'm hating HER long before i even know her? Because she's not Buffy and she's treating Faith like she owns her, LOL. I know if she was Buffy then this won't be an interesting story anymore.

There's a high chance that you guys will make me like her. But for now, i don't. There's something about her that rubs me the wrong way *cough, she's a snob, cough*. The fact that she has the same features as Buffy only makes it all the more irritating. Are these also some of the reasons why Angel doesn't seem to like her?

One thing I do know, she's not a Buffy-doppelganger slayer. She's not strong enough, and Faith does not trust her to go outside by herself.

Only at chapter 2 and I'm already edgy to find out the story behind Faith's relationship. I know she's got every right to have one. *dammit I keep rolling my eyes at the thought of HER*. Why is Faith keeping HER presence a 'secret' from Buffy?

Who is singing 'Someone Like You'? I have so many questions... *patience is a virtue*



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Enemies and Allies

Sorry for the late review. This turtle is extra slow this month. I'm happy to see that someone other than Buffy is genuinely excited to see Faith in SF. And I never knew that NKOTB is an effective ice-breaker :D But the Dawn and Xander kissage, still icky for my imagination.

"Sounds like a nice game of role-playing," she observed. "...'cause I need more of that in my life," she mumbled to herself. ~ Hmmm... Faith, are you hiding something else, aside from that lady in your motel room?

I can imagine Faith's attention shifting from Simone to Satsu. She obviously felt the change in Buffy's demeanor, saw the teary eyes. But the kicker was when Buffy said, "...we might have slept together a few times." Now the job has turned from professional to personal. How did Faith's laugh sound like? The sound says a lot. Too bad I can't hear it :)

Hmmm, why is it that Buffy seems to be interested in befriending Faith ("Buffy's putting a lot of...faith in you")? Not that I'm against the idea. Just wondering if it's a genuine interest, brought about by the loss of magic. Or she's feeling lonely again and Faith is pretty kissable *kidding*

BTW, I liked the retorts and comments that Faith is spewing whenever she's around the scoobies. So impatient and funny :D



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 4: Her

Based on the interactions, I have to say that Faith's relationship with this woman is quite deep. Her honesty alone with her speaks volumes. She knows about slaying. She even knows about Faith's 'feelings' towards Buffy (which by the way I have no idea yet).

I gotta give HER props for acting genuinely concerned when Faith blurted out that Buffy had some 'interactions' with another woman. I read no jealousy, only real caring and worry. How, how, how, did their relationship develop into this? *yeah, yeah, another mystery for another chapter*

I shall try and ignore/tolerate the cheesiness that is happening between her and Faith. Faith appears to be happy. Their behavior towards each other is typical of couples who are in love. They are honest and are acting maturely (HER tolerating Faith's flirtations). So no, I have no reason to hate her. Not in this chapter anyway. *Oh why does Angel not like her?*

Okay, you have to explain to me why SHE is stabbing her salad? I missed something. Also, was Faith fishing for information about Buffy's relationship with Spike. Was that why SHE was irritated? Or did SHE not like to meet Buffy? I totally missed something there. Help?



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Old Habits

You know what's starting to look suspect? It's Buffy and her actions towards Faith. Was she checking out Faith and her disheveled attire and hair? Why was she so awkward at the motel? So conscious. They're both acting like inept teenagers around each other. Cute.

I didn't like it one bit when Faith offered to not go out just cause she thought her gf was jealous. Really? She's that whipped? Really!?! (Yeah, it's my being a fuffy-lover that's causing the irritation). The rational part of me is telling me that Faith is just being a good gf. It just irritates me that it's so easy for her to drop Buffy and the scoobies. I guess that's what happens when someone provides her with the love and care she so desires. She knows where her priorities lie.

LMAO on Dawn's toast :D :D :D

What I do love about this chapter is it shows that no matter how much Faith's into her gf, she's still unable to control her body's reaction towards Buffy. That dancing was hot. What are you doing Buffy? Why are you being so forward with Faith? I hope I'll read your thoughts soon, heh :D

Also, why does SHE have perfect timing -_- ??? Grrr... SO irritating!!! I'll hold my tongue now >_>



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Red Herring

What!?!? No. That was just... Oh Faith :(

I could accept that this British girl resembled Buffy. But her looking exactly like Buffy, that's just... WHAT WERE YOU THINKING FAITH!?!?

WHY'D YOU EVEN BRING HER TO SF? Pack her bags and ship her off to wherever she came from before Simone kills her.

No wonder you're acting like that. Oh my tummy is hurting.



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 7: happy birthday

Faith's really matured over the year. She's in a stable relationship, and now we find she's able to maintain and value her friendship with these two guys. It's nice to see her having a life, even if these are just snippets.

So this is how they met, and that is what why she looks like Buffy. Gotta hand it to her friends, they gave Faith the best gift to date, "...Without even knowing her, this woman, whoever she was, had managed to capture her greatest fantasy." I would have been powerless to leave too. If it was me being asked 'by the woman I desire the most', I would have blindly followed her. We've all got fantasies we'd like to live out. Faith's living a dream, I won't take it against her cause it's her birthday after all.

"The woman even had the same freckles as the Chosen One." LoL, can't help thinking that Faith really inspected Buffy's body during that swap. Which makes me wonder, why is she STILL wearing Buffy's face after all this time? Do they always make love with HER looking like Buffy? Oh so many questions. Faith, how can you live like that, seeing Buffy in HER?!? Torture!!!

As much as I wanna hear what Faith's thoughts are about this whole thing, I wanna see Buffy's reaction to seeing Faith in a relationship with this English version of her. Oh, you guys have us addicted.



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 8: Just a Girl

I'm enjoying the backstory, seeing how Angel reacted to seeing Kate, and how Kate reacted to Angel.

I have to say I'm happy to NOT have read about Kate and Faith's first time together. I don't know how I'd react to that. I am thinking at that time, Faith was just taking advantage of the chance given to her. It's the closest thing she's got to spending time with 'Buffy'. I can 'forgive' her for that.

But my brain keeps asking, why did Kate look like Buffy in the motel room? It's been ages since that first time. They've probably come to an agreement or something. I wanna learn more of how this relationship works. How Kate can accept this. Can Kate read current emotions, or just see the past.

Sorry if my comments aren't as thoughtful lately. You seem to be drowning in long commentaries so I think all' good.



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 9: Blame

You're right, this chapter did answer some of my questions. That dramatic exit by Buffy made me laugh; she had to pee, lol! I can imagine her face when she said, "Uh, guys....can we stop someplace? I still have to pee."

"Plus, I've never punished you over the fact that you're in love with another girl.", Aaaah, so Faith is still in love with Buffy. Which makes me think again, who is Faith thinking about when she's spending time with her gf? I am still unsure if Kate is able to read other people's thoughts. I'm still waiting for the explanation as to why Kate still looks like Buffy.

Gotta give it to Kate. How can she accept the position she's in? She knows that Faith's in love with another girl. And now she's listening to Faith moan and complain because her relationship with Buffy is in trouble again. She seems very secure in herself. Is there some kind of understanding between these two that we don't know yet? Or is it already understood that though Faith is in love with Buffy, she knows that she'll NEVER get a chance with her. So instead, she's accepted to settle with Kate.

Made me smile to see Buffy thinking that Faith bought a Buffy-bot for herself. Bet she also assumes that Faith is using 'IT' for her sexual pleasure :D

I will have to admit that I am actually enjoying this conundrum that Faith is in. I can't feel no angst yet. Might be cause you inserted some funny in between the seriousness. Can't wait to see what Faith's next move will be, or how Buffy will react to it. Excited for Monday :D



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 10: Only Human

You are making me like Kate. She sounded so human and vulnerable. And her wanting to feel loved by Faith even if it meant having to look like Buffy, that took a lot of strenght. How can I hate her for that? And then she goes to Buffy to plead for Faith's forgiveness. You are not giving me much choice. You planned this so well, no?

It's really painful, the setup Kate and Faith are living with. If only Faith didn't need to go to SF, if she didn't have to help Buffy, if she didn't ever have to see Buffy again, just maybe she'd learn to love Kate as much as she loved Buffy. Too bad it's a fuffy story. They would have had a good life together. Faith seemed happy enough. Kate too.

I am seriously excited to find out what will happen when Faith and Buffy meet. I'm praying that Faith won't believe that it's really BUFFY and not Kate who is in front of her (i hope her senses are dull due to all that alcohol, and that she won't feel the tingly sensation and all). But yeah, that's my wish.

Did you see how fast I shifted from feeling sorry for Kate to wanting Fuffy? Yes, I have no shame.



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Chase The Moon by Electra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Being awake from her coma and back in the fold doesn't exactly mean Faith's history of bad decisions is completely behind her.


Category: Season > Season 4, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Anya Jenkins, Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Joyce Summers, Riley Finn, Rupert Giles, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 10863 | Read count: 6319 | Published: 09/09/2013 | Updated: 02/06/2015 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 09/12/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is Faith going to be a Wolf? Cause that moon, and those eyes. I like your banner :) Faith has beautiful eyes.

The Wonderbrat is kinda persuasive, huh? Did she stick a knife to your knees? You could have kicked her. She's tiny. Or maybe lifted her by her hair. But then if you did that we wouldn't be blessed with this new story. And my imagination just went off-tangent again. Sorry.

Buffy visiting Faith. At last something that sounded humane. I know they had lives, as you've clearly mentioned here. But in canon, no one really mentioned that they visited Faith while she was in the coma. To me, that's just too harsh.

I love that Buffy involved Giles and her mom. Can't imagine her taking on this responsibility by herself, or in secret. I foresee Xander drama, Willow drama, and Riley drama (barf). Don't want Buffy to be without support.

I am scared about how Faith is gonna be for the next couple of chapters. Is she gonna be volatile? Probably. Gotta build up the angst after all. I will have a heart problem by the time you and the Brat finish you fics.

I so love that you are back E!!! Let's do Zumba to celebrate *trips on my shoelaces...

Author's Response:

Tis an ominous banner, no?  Haha.  I can't answer your questions just yet, Topak.  I must leave some mystery about the story, though I'm sure Alice will tell you about it if you ask nicely. She did not knife my knees; she did, however, threaten to cut off my hair and glue it to my face though.  Okay, maybe she didn't, but I'm sure she was thinking it.  ;)  I'm glad you like the banner though!  :)

Yeah, Faith kind of got the short end of the stick as far as people caring for her went.  Of course I have to try to fix that here!  I figure giving Buffy a team of committed helpers here would make the situation more likely to work.  Besides, who doesn't love Joyce??  lol

I'll try not to hurt your heart too much, dear Topak.  The Zumba should help with that, because cardio is all kinds of awesome.  I'll buy you shoes without laces :)



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 09/24/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Whew, I am so behind on my reviews. Forgive my lateness Wonder Woman.

I love that your Buffy is so invested in helping Faith. I can imagine Buffy sitting inside the hospital room, doing her homework, while Faith pretends to ignore her.

As always, having Joyce around makes me feel safe. Like everything is gonna work out. See! She is able to talk to Faith. Ah, the power of mothers. Darn Giles for not letting Faith stay at Buffy's place. I am having pervy thoughts about sleepovers and things. Oh... I forgot you plan for some angst. Le sigh.

"and secondly because there's still a lingering feeling in her gut that Faith might just use it to strangle her." ~ LoL. This made me snort.
"All Buffy needs to do is wake up with a tail or a horn..." ~ Ahem. This caught my attention. *squints at you*

How did Riley know about Faith? And why does he get to talk to Buffy in that tone? I get why the Scoobies are reacting like they do. Riley? I want to flush him down the drain. Cause... Just because. *Swishes tail*

It sucks to hate anyone. But I really dislike it when Willow goes on the defensive when it comes to Faith. Thank goodness for Tara.

I will try not to bite my nails while you work on your inspiration and motivation. I still wanna find out about the title *catches self from biting nails.*



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 02/13/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woot! So it took me a while to get here, but I'm glad the brat and you are writing again. So who won the writing challenge?

This looks interesting. I promise I've read the previous chapters, but I can't recall anymore what they were about. Old brain has ineffective memory. But if you're really gonna release every week, I Promise to reread from the beginning.

I liked that part where Buffy comes in to massage lotion into Faith's arm. That seems so intimate and loving. I can imagine it's also some form of therapy for Buffy. Being with Faith, touching her, talking to her. I really hope you to see the next chapter.



Banner for fuffy fic Hextracurricular Activity

Hextracurricular Activity by Dylan


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

A slightly different take on Season 3, Buffy and Faith get a demon sized shove that sends them both searching for clarity. 


Category: Season > Season 3, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: PWP, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 9065 | Read count: 6738 | Published: 09/13/2013 | Updated: 09/23/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 09/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Faith. I hate how they treated her sometimes. And here, no one even bothered to check on her. And she's lamenting the 'injustice' of it all. But she did lie when they asked if she was all right.

Whee! Faith didn't kill Finch!!! I am vastly optimistic now. Horray for your return!!! *waits for you to pull the rug under my feet and make me suffer in angst and longing*

"That Iggy Pop demon," Buffy says eagerly.~~ LoL Buffy!

The pounding headaches and irritability are only calmed by the presence of Buffy as she looks at Faith. And Buffy feels the same. Plus extreme horniness. Ha! Can't wait how this goes.

Glad to have you back D!



Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 09/28/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh man, this is becoming addictive. The intensity of emotions from both Faith and Buffy is so palpable.

I do feel a bit scared of how this will turn out. Like Faith said, this feeling of being insanely attracted to Faith is new to Buffy. If Faith were to push herself on Buffy, there is a big possibility that Buffy will blame Faith for taking advantage of Buffy's weakness.

Take advantage anyway, Faith!!! Dylan's gonna fix this. Hahahaha! Kidding. Can't wait for the next installment.



Like You Stole Something: Three Times Faith Ran and One Time She Didn’t by AussiRayne

Rated: Mature [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

PWP. Babies having fun.


Category: Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: PWP
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2904 | Read count: 2874 | Published: 10/18/2013 | Updated: 10/18/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: topak Signed
Date: 10/31/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woah, I didn't expect that. *wipes sweat off forehead*

I liked how well you wrote your sentences and paragraphs.

It is a dark story, and I get how Faith and Buffy's relationship are mostly shown through the copious amount of sex they seem to have. I wondered for a bit if I was still in c2 or in literotica. LoL!

I did have some trouble figuring out if Faith was having sex with Buffy or another blonde, as you've mentioned darkening of the eyes. For a moment I questioned myself since B had hazel eyes and well, I am not sure if the pupils can grow so big that they become that noticeable.

Anyway. Good writing style :)