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Somnaire
by aliceinwonderbra

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Part of the Ten Roads Series, basically ten times B/F could have connected with each other. Set during the BtVS Season 4 episode This Year's Girl. "Her friends all think it’s naïve, but she desperately wants to believe that she can help Faith this time."


Category: Season > Season 4, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: Ten Roads
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4918 | Read count: 8063 | Published: 07/05/2013 | Updated: 07/05/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/14/2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I couldn't be happier with Riley's betrayal, it had the advantage of getting him out the way pretty quickly (sentimentally speaking)! :D

Well done to Buffy for showing a lot of resilience because honestly, who could resist the urge of walking away? Not canon Buffy, sadly.

 



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Flowers for a Ghost by aliceinwonderbra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Buffy leaps into Glory's portal knowing it means certain death. She wakes up in the hospital, but something is not quite right.


Category: Season > Season 5, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: Flowers for a Ghost
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 43441 | Read count: 42389 | Published: 07/15/2013 | Updated: 08/10/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhhhh I think I am going to enjoy this story *a lot* (*grin*).

I am laughing when imagining Buffy's face when she scans her bedroom and realises that there is stuff that does not belong to her... btw how come a vibrator is visible to anyone who is in the room? Are non-evil Faith and this new dimension Buffy into a voyeuristic relationship or what??!! O_O'

I can't wait for B and F to discover themselves under a new light!

Excellent intro, thank you Aliceinwonderbra :D



Author's Response:

Lol! I think they just weren't expecting someone else to be in their bedroom and/or they didn't think about cleaning up before they went to fight Glory.



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Previously on Flowers for a ghost: Buffy: 1 ; hell bitch: 0

Chapter 2: Buffy: -100; non-evil Faith: 1

I soooo like how freaked out Buffy is, with her "questionable dating taste". She needs to chill out, what if she gets stuck for a while, or rather indefinitely, in this new dimension?

And poor Faith, how hard it is for her to lose her lover and get instead a self-righteous b*tch!! :'(



Author's Response:

I love your score keeping. I think you're being a little hard on Buffy here! Her last interaction with Faith was Faith literally stealing her body, sleeping with her boyfriend while in said body, then deciding to turn herself in. She's suspicious and I think that's fair. But I am a Buffy girl through and through. :) She can do no wrong in my eyes (okay like 90% of the time). 



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 3: Buffy: -75; Faith: 3

We may get there eventually... or not, there are only 10 chapters.

Ok Angel is not part of this dimension (but he may come back, then? who knows??), the Gwendolyn Post event turned differently - will Buffy question herself on this: even with Angel around, could have she behaved differently towards Faith?? (*thinking*).

Thanks for the writing btw, I really enjoy reading you (as usual!).



Author's Response:

I would say yes, Buffy questions herself, even if it takes a while. :) But hey, -75! She's getting better.



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

As I was too keen to move on to the next chapter I forgot half of what I wanted to comment in the first place for the 3rd chapter (*blushing*) - I am so sloppy!

I was actually wondering what happened that day at the motel and was hoping that we would find out soon - thanks for not leaving me too long in the dark about it ^^

It is how Buffy behaved which explains the different turn of event - on one hand a self- & Angel-centered Buffy, who clearly doesn't give a sh*t about Faith (ok, I recognize that when the love of your life comes back from hell, you may struggle putting yourself together... but still!), and on the other hand a Buffy who somehow manages to dedicate enough time and energy for a new relationship. So basically, it's (mainly) Buffy's fault that Faith turned all evil! XD

I also wanted to comment on how Giles interacts with Buffy - he's so nice and wise! I hope Buffy can make the best of him to cope with the situation that she's got to live with from now on. 

 

I was so heartbroken to witness Faith breakdown like that - it is essentially the end of her world :'( I only hope she can find peace and heal, but it's not going to be easy with the other Buffy around.

It's a shame that the start of their friendly relationship (if I can call it like that) was ruined on the same day with that journal. If Buffy had not read the journal, I think it would have meant she doesn't care about this Faith. As spooky as it seems, I support her reading the journal (but maybe not the whole of it), but she has to deal with the consequences after (of course Faith is going to be extremely mad at her, that is soooo private!). However she could have done better with her explanations, it all came out wrong (I was curious - urgh!!), or think of a better moment to give it back to Faith.

To recap, Buffy: -75 + 50 (for the comforting and finally showing some humanity towards Faith) -5 (because she doesn't get it yet, she did not try hard enough with her Faith... but she's on the right track to recognize it) + 0 (for journal reading) = -30; Faith: 3 +1 (for being able to show her vulnerability) +1 (for wanting Buffy to go back to school) + 5 (for asking Buffy the right questions but not being too pushy - wow how can some "small" events make a person totally different!) = +10

The gap is reducing :) 




Author's Response:

Lol! Okay, I don't agree that it's mainly Buffy's fault Faith went evil. I think the blame for not noticing her struggles and acting appropriately is on the adults (mostly Giles as he's around longer than Wesley). 

That's an interesting take on the journal, and I don't think anyone's ever said that before. In fairness to Buffy, I agree it's understandable for her to want to read it. There's no one here in this world who can give her the perspective that journal can. Buffy and Faith are both struggling in different ways, and I don't think Buffy's too slow to warm up really. This is a crazy situation and she's trying. She'll get there!



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ahahah I loved the "I read it, too" and can picture Buffy's horrified face XD but hey that whole journal reading thing is a blessing in disguise! She got to initiate a real conversation with Dawn, and appears less cold-blooded with Faith.

In the end she deserves some attention too, it's good to see her getting there.

Buffy: -10; Faith: +10



Author's Response:

Dawn's nosiness for the win! 



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay! Buffy managed to chill out!! I loved the movie evening with the popcorn - too bad they were loud enough and woke Dawn up XD, I would give anything to know what Buffy was ready to give Faith to set her free!! (*mischevious grin*)

Thank you Willow for being so cheeky monkey - can't wait to see what happens next!

Buffy: +5 (she accepts her feelings toward Faith, and she was convincing in front of the social worker); Faith: +11 (she's loosening up :D)

Thank you Aliceinwonderbra for being so creative ;)



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for all your kind comments. :) We can't get to the good stuff too quick (it must be interrupted by Dawn!). 



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Me going through the chapter:

She wore no bra beneath her tight black tank top - how come? Is there something that we missed?

She was going to torture Willow - ahaha I'd like to see that!!! Payback's a b*tch XD

"Tara in my world was shy just like you, but she met someone. Someone who loves her like crazy, and helped her realize how amazing she is." - ok what's Buffy's plan here? Introducing Tara to Willow so that she and Faith are no longer the only gays in the village? Or hoping that Tara can send her back to her dimension?

"when you had this epic love story with the girl who eats her own hair" - I fell from my chair. Jealous much??

"And what do you mean you were straight?" - oooopsss

She had her best friend's demise to plot as revenge - hehehe, moving from torture to killing

Before they quite made it there, Faith stepped back - What??? No no no noooo

"I shouldn't have stopped doing that." - it's good to see the girl come back to her senses

Just being this close to Buffy was making her uncomfortably wet. - will Faith free her mind and let it go??

...

...

...

She pressed both hands to her mouth, smothering the first sob that tore from her throat. - that was going to happen, unfortunately. I hope she'll be able to go over it!

--> next chapter!!



Author's Response:

No bra, just for the comfortableness and the long drive. Poor Willow is just trying to help and she gets threats made against her. :D 

Buffy's plan is really just rescuing Tara as her friend. :D 



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Uh-oh - major freak out time! I'm not sure I want to know what are Buffy's intentions when she believes she has to let Faith go :/ o_o'  

It's cool to have Tara joining the group, she's so kind! :) Maybe she can help them somehow?

Buffy:+?; Faith: +? - I lost track of the counting :/



Author's Response:

I'm sure Faith is probably still ahead a little bit in points. :) Tara WILL help!



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You're much welcome but I don't know if I should thank you for the creativity you revealed in this chapter... :/ XD

 

Lost and Delirious - seriously??? You wanted Buffy to kill herself or what?



Author's Response:

Hahaha! No! But Lost and Delirious came out around this time and it's a quintessential gay movie! :D 



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/18/2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm glad Faith made that first step during the wedding, and that Buffy wrote that letter to the other Faith and shared it - they both made the extra effort --> Buffy: 0; Faith, 0 ! ^^

Tara is definitely an excellent friend - I'm thinking, is it because Buffy wanted to have a *real* friend, who did not know her from this dimension Scooby crew, that she went after her? (not sure I'm making any sense after so much binging on your fic).

 

If you considered this series to be not as good as your most recent work, then I'll retort back: who are you kidding, serioulsy????

The plot was excellent, the variety of emotions your B/F characters and myself experience is huge and it felt good (at least for me, not so much for B & F sadly). The only frustration I have at this stage is the uncertainty of the relationship between B & F, are they going to manage to make it work and if yes, how and what will result out of it (platonic friendship or loving relationship, or...)? Frustrating but that's actually a good end for the story. Maybe there's more onto it with your fic Graduation but I need to go through The Girl From Away first and see what it's like for the other Buffy and con-Faith, which promises to be thrilling (no pressure ^^).

So, THANK YOU!!!!!

Hope you enjoyed the comments, even though they are obviously coming long after you published the story and they can't influence it anymore (although I am not sure at all they would have influenced it in any way!!).

See you soon ;)



Author's Response:

Buffy wanted to rescue Tara basically, but it just worked out that Tara then helps rescue her in return. 

Okay, so what I still find to be not up to my current level of writing is just about the way things are written. This older stuff still uses "the blond, the older slayer, etc" rather than just names and pronouns. I think that's a very fanfic specific writing issue, and I no longer use those. If I had plenty of time on my hands, I'd go back and edit these to not include that stuff. But plot wise and B/F interaction-wise, I am proud of these. I'm glad people still find these and enjoy them!  Thank you so much for all your lovely comments. :D



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Omega Rising by aliceinwonderbra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Faith's been in prison for four months when a large scale zombie outbreak occurs. It's the end of the world. Again. Set after a modified Season 4.


Category: Season > Season 4, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Angel, Buffy Summers, Charles Gunn, Faith Lehane, Spike, Tara Maclay, Wesley Wyndam-Pryce
Genres: Action, Adventure, Horror
Warnings: Character Death, Gore
Series: Omega-verse
Chapters: 16 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 59938 | Read count: 15351 | Published: 07/15/2013 | Updated: 07/18/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Outbreak

you're setting the scene for a pretty doomed world already!! I'm not so keen witth horror scenarios but I'll give it a try, the perspective of a B/F relationship is a good incentive :D

Double challenge accepted (to have it finished in 2 days'time :p)!



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: On the Road

Zombies literally crawling from everywhere... for someone who doesn't particularly enjoy writing fight scenes, you did well! Or is this setup different somehow?

I'm glad Faith and Kim were able to find some civilisation (although having a gun pointed at them is probably not their ideal outcome).



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Survivors

I hope that Wesley will see the good in Faith, and/or Faith will find Angel so that Faith can build back some confidence... she does need it! however I'm keen to see in which psychological state she will be when she meets Buffy again - she may be greeted with a punch in the face?



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Protectors

Clearly this is a more-than-crappy situation here, zombies and vamps.... which definitely requires two slayers!! :D



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Prophecy

Hey Faith, how about a "sorry I punched you in the face" rather than "Cordelia. Still among the living, huh?"? Can't really complain afterwards if people throw at you the exact same line... or would it be a tactic to experience endless guilt and an excuse for fucking it up later?

Angel's soulmate... I can already imagine the difficult choices to come :/

 



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Hell, Population: Three More People

At last!!! They made it to Sunnydale :D

Haha I'm joking. At last!!! Buffy's here :D



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Genesis

Whoaa so this is where it came from... what a b*tch (Walsh, of course)! The only good thing in this whole doomed situation is that Riley seems to be off for good!

Finally some B/F stuff? Well you indicate they are going to interact, but it does not necessarily mean this is what we (or at least I) have been waiting for :p



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Ground Zero

I could feel the cold tension in that store! It is hard for Faith but it's not like she does not deserve some of it... but nothing hurts more than indifference :/

I hope she'll manage to make her way through Buffy's heart somehow... which may have already started! (yeah that's me being too romantic perhaps).



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Faith's Choice

Question: what would have Buffy said if Faith hadn't cut her, when they both were in Buffy's house? 

Comment: Where is Angel? Now that's a cliffhanger! It would be a shame to lose him :/

Braaaaaain: sorry I can't think straight anymore ;)



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Collateral Damage

That's a strategy, to have only the two slayers surviving the Zombi-pocalypse! This may give Faith more chances with Buffy XD



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Rites

Given the tone of the story, I'd say it was just a matter of time before Xander and Giles would turn into zombies... though!

I had forgotten about Kim and I really liked how things are quickly evolving between Faith and her friend (not Kim, the other one... ^^).

Cordelia's vision... hum... let me think... Angel and Spike will have to sacrifice themselves to save the world?? (and thus giving Faith the full space she needs with Buffy) XDXDXD



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blurry Visions

I was not too bad guessing what Cordelia had seen: it did involve Angel saving the world!

I'm not too sure how they will manage to cure all the zombies though, apart from somehow (magically? why not, they have Tara with them) making a rain of the demon's blood :/



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Splinters

B - "What are you gonna do then?"

F - "probably have a spontaneous orgasm" XDXDXD I wished for a second that Buffy could hear that, wondering whether she could freak out, or jump on Faith's bones :D

Hummm playing along with Faith, it starts to be really interesting!



Reviewer: bebs Signed
Date: 12/17/2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Bedside Manner

Just FYI, the videogame where you have to literally drive on people to get points and finish the race is actually Carmageddon, not GTA :X Just saying... XD

I must admit that yes, it took some time to get there but I did enjoy the slow build up; although I'm relieved somehow that they went for a slay --> hungry probably, horny for sure! I'm pleased they managed to get there eventually - not just the sex part, I think it is deeper than that for Buffy (it definitely is for Faith). You surely know how to captivate your audience, and keep them hooked until the end of the story :D