Awesome start!! So glad I gently pushed you towards choosing this idea to go with for a fresh start *grin* Can't wait for it to unfold. You know how much I adore your writing and this fic promises to deliver all that wonderful Electra goodness. As always your Buffy voice is spot on, and the little touch with the lotion, etc, was pretty damn inspired - it's something so simple yet intimate. 

I know ish where this fic is headed and I'm eager for more. Love that you're writing again. Grats for leaving me panting for more Fuffy even though I'm not exactly into them anymore. But then you do have a knack of leaving me panting in general ;)

Keep it coming x

I really enojoyed this. You always make it seem so effortless. your writing that is. You bring the good stuff :)

And I agree with T, your writing has defintely matured. It makes it a joy to read. Your Buffy is as good as always, and the funnies come without it looking like you're trying too hard. Your Fuffy will always make me smile but I'd read pretty much anything you did (and that's not me just being biased, honest) :p

Full of great lines, subtle sexiness, and sweet resolution.  

- "What? Stab good. Stab always good!" -

Thank you for sharing this, and I vote for more Walk The Line :D

xxx

This was most definitely an enjoyable little slice of Fuffy pie ^^

Your mature!Faith voice is exactly how I imagine it should be. I like that she didn't push Buffy in this too; she let her figure it out, only getting a little pushy at the end there in the bathroom - which was a rather nice little scene, even if I would have preferred it to get a bit more xrated ;) Still, it was kinda hot as it was.

- "Yes, though the part with the panties is never intentional. Once they come off they go rogue and I never see them again." -

Amen to that...lol 

Good work, and give us more of these shenanigans, you :) 

I had fun reading this through for you :)

Though I'm not particularly into the Fuffy thing so much these days (Cara/Kahlan is SO my OTP for life now as you know), I still really enjoy your writing, and the spin you put on this relationship. Your grasp of Buffy and Faith and their intricate dynamic is one of the best I've read in the fandom. I've thought that from the start, when you first popped up to make my fics look incredibly bad compared to yours.

This little fic, though seemingly fairly simple, had some super nice elements. Your Faith PoV is always entertaining and I laughed out loud at several parts. The kiss was unexpected but somehow perfect. Many comic lines, humorous parts, serious parts, and delightful Fuffiness in this to enjoy. There are just too many little parts of this (as with all your fics) for me to pick out to highlight. I want to highlight it all!

Practically perfect in every way :D 

Fucking awesome to see you posting new stuff. Makes me feel all nostalgic when reading your Faith and Buffy. As always, with the funny, and the cute, and the bring me more! :)