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Real name: Alice
Gender: slayer
Member since: 07/05/2013
Beta-reader: Electra
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Cat lady. House plant enthusiast. Writer of Fuffy.


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Chase The Moon by Electra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Being awake from her coma and back in the fold doesn't exactly mean Faith's history of bad decisions is completely behind her.


Category: Season > Season 4, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Anya Jenkins, Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Joyce Summers, Riley Finn, Rupert Giles, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 10863 | Read count: 6323 | Published: 09/09/2013 | Updated: 02/06/2015 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/17/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"So you're counting on her weakened state to keep her in line yet you plan on making her stronger through rigorous training so that she can pursue her vengeance?" Anya asks, more inquisitive than anything.

Lol! Oh, Anya! Always making with the unintentional funny. :D

I know their jerkiness is realistic for the Scoobs, but I still kind of hate them. Faith's awake now, so what do they propose happen? Turn her over to the council? They must know that's a horrible idea. We're talking about the people that put slayers through life or death tests, and fired Giles for helping save Buffy's life. See if I forgive you when you go crazy, Willow the great jerk!

As you might expect, I also hate Riley. He wasn't even around when Faith was awake, so he should shut his pie hole and trust Buffy to know what she's doing.

I'll admit though, having no contingency plan sounds kind of stupid. I mean, not to me, because I know it's gonna work out and they're gonna ride off into the sunset together (RIGHT??). But to the Scoobs, it must seem crazy.

I love Tara, in her one speaking line, she just gets right to my heart. She'll talk to Willow for Buffy, because she cares about their friendship, even though she must have just met Buffy. Tara is so wonderful and sweet. More Tara I say! Also, more Faith! Looking forward to awkward B/F interactions coming our way. Also I give you kudos for recognizing that Faith would require recovery time, even if she is a slayer. :) More! Mooooooooore!



Author's Response:

Anya always had such great one-liners in the show!  It's fun to write her because I can just let her say the things everyone is thinking but afraid to verbalize.  :p

I think they're all justly worried, but like you said, what else can they do?  They help her, they turn her in, or they shun her and make her go cuckoo again.  The answer seems pretty obvious to me!

There will be more Tara, since she's such a great neutral person.  She's very sympathetic, and I think Buffy needs that, even if she barely knows the girl.  Buffy will take anyone on her side at this point!  lol  PLus, I like when Tara is friends with people Willow is not.  Is that because Willow make me bitter? Perhaps.  Haha.

Plenty more to come, including lots of Fuffy fun.  Thanks for reading!  :)



Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/09/2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I re-skimmed the first two chapters so I could read this one back in my Chase the Moon zone. To recap, eff you Willow, and double eff you, Riley. 

Now, I shall start with a complaint. Too short! I am dying of Electra writing thirst and you fling four droplets of water at me and call it a day. Then you set up the opportunity for Faith to be like so can you pls explain why you've been rubbing lotion on my unconscious body for 8 months and you leave me hanging! You are a cruel, cruel soul. 

As usual, I loved their interactions and I loved how Buffy Buffy was. :) Joyce and Giles also for the win. Nurse with wheelchair, who made the future awkward conversation about Buffy and the lotion possible,  for the honorable mention. I look forward to more! Hopefully soon! 



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Hextracurricular Activity by Dylan


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

A slightly different take on Season 3, Buffy and Faith get a demon sized shove that sends them both searching for clarity. 


Category: Season > Season 3, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: PWP, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 9065 | Read count: 6738 | Published: 09/13/2013 | Updated: 09/23/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 09/13/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

All right, Ms. Dylan, you've hooked me. Are you going to leave me hanging though? D: I hope not!

You said there would be no intrigue, but I'm intrigued. :) I like this demon-forced hanging out they're going to have to do. Also the red panties. :p Poor Giles. I wonder how much of these symptoms they're going to report to him tomorrow? :p 

It's going to be an interesting conundrum for Buffy too, with Angel in the picture. 

So, are you furiously working on chapter 2, or...?



Author's Response:

I wouldn't say furiously ...lol Doing a bit here and there though so hope you'll check out chapter 2 :)

 

THanks. 



So Damn Domestic by Salix

Rated: Mature [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Takes place after Chosen.  Buffy and Faith share the domestic life together; battling the ups and downs of motherhood, being in a long term relationship, and balancing all of that with slaying.


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Dawn Summers, Kennedy, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 65 | Completed: No | Word count: 728234 | Read count: 22235 | Published: 09/18/2013 | Updated: 10/29/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 10/07/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - A Weird Night

Salix! Okay, let me be honest. Baby and/or kid fics usually make me run in the opposite direction, hence why I have never read this before. But I happened to click on your latest chapter (linking your update on twitter) and I liked what I saw. It seems like the B/F relationship still remains important, and I'm intrigued by the idea of watching their relationship grow and change throughout the years. So I figured I better start from the beginning and see what other goodness you've got stashed in here! :D

The prologue moves fast, setting the scene for what's to come. I really liked Faith's speech to Buffy. No immediate psycho meltdown, just very honest, very hurt why would you do it? It was very effective. I'm excited to see where it goes from here. 



Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 10/09/2013 Title: Chapter 2: A Dog, A Fight, and Two Silk Scarves

You know, I think I'm with Faith on the dog thing. Yes, he ate the dinner and he destroys stuff, and makes a nuisance of himself in most ways but... he's a family member! D': They can't get rid of him! It's just wrong!

I liked the touch about Faith needing to be held after having sex. It's very sweet and really illustrates their emotional connection. :)



Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 10/09/2013 Title: Chapter 3: First Day Insecurities

Great chapter. I loved how they were totally melting down over Matthew starting school. I would have been pissed at some random dude for asking about the parentage of my kid too. That's really intrusive and over the line. Did I miss this in the previous chapter... Wondering if they work?



Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 10/17/2013 Title: Chapter 4: And the Oscar for Best Actress in a Drama Goes To...

I hate Kennedy with the passion of a thousand suns. Not because of this, I just mean in general. So maybe I'm biased, but it feels oddly in character for her to act like this. :p 

Just to show you I'm not a one trick pony tho, I totally hate Faith here too. She is way off base in how she talked to Buffy. Wanted to kick her. 



Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 10/23/2013 Title: Chapter 5: Future Stressing of a Pain Filled Past

That was a really rough chapter, from Willow's pain, to Faith's, and then that final scene. Ouch. :( I'm nervous for what's in store next. 



No Discussion Needed by Hayley

Rated: Mature [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Faith is captured and Buffy goes to rescue her.


Category: Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Xander Harris
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2848 | Read count: 2690 | Published: 09/29/2013 | Updated: 09/29/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 09/30/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay! Buffy to the rescue! Gotta love Faith's attitude. That kiss was for a stubbed toe? Hahah. :p This was a perfect amount of sweet, plus take charge Buffy, whom I love. :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I figured if anyone would say something like that, it'd be Faith.  I love take charge Buffy, too.  :)



The Unexpected Party by Hayley

Rated: Teen [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Written for the Fic or Treat Contest.  Set four years after Chosen and does not follow the comics.  Faith has moved into the castle with the rest of the team and Buffy needs to adjust to her presence during Halloween festivities.


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, Kennedy, Rupert Giles, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Fic-or-Treat Contest Entries
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4075 | Read count: 5350 | Published: 10/25/2013 | Updated: 10/25/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 10/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So cute and fluffy! I loved it. Poor Buffy. Too proud to ask Willow to magic her up something? I loved the little side plot about Dawn too. :) Kudos! You should write more. It's not Halloween yet. Let's turn this into a Halloween series. What'dya say? :D



Author's Response:

Hmm, it has potential.  :)  I'll have to see if I can update something else this weekend first so I won't feel like I've neglected everything else.  Thanks for the feedback!!



I'll Always Opt To Fall Down These Stairs by beergood

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

One light Slayer and one dark, one good and one bad, one goes to heaven and one to... Well anyway, for all sorts of reasons, Detroit was just about the last place Buffy expected to run into Faith. With or without wings.

Written for the Fic or Treat Contest, set post-series.


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Series: Fic-or-Treat Contest Entries
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3282 | Read count: 7121 | Published: 10/31/2013 | Updated: 10/31/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Date: 10/31/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Up there! Up there! Up there!

Hmm, the mind of Beergood is an interesting place... :p Character death, literally transforming into some sort of Hell's Angel, this fic was crazy. But crazy good. I LOVED it! The tail was fantastic, and I was oddly amused by Buffy nailing the slayervore right in the snout with her knife. Also loved the idea of Faith just picking the demon up, flying up several stories and dropping it to the ground. Awesome new power. :D It was cute, it was weird, it was funny. Bravo. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was a weird idea, but I just had to write it down. Glad it worked for you!



The Tell-Tale Tail by Imrryr

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Faith’s costume for the Halloween party ends up being a little more lifelike than she planned. Written for the Fic or Treat Contest.


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Fic-or-Treat Contest Entries
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 7266 | Read count: 7070 | Published: 10/31/2013 | Updated: 10/31/2013 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Imrryr, where have you been all my life?! Do you have more fuffy fic you haven't posted here? I need more, and I need it now! :D

This was excellent. Your characterization was beautiful. You took the tail challenge in a totally unexpected, and totally adorable, direction. It was so sweet, and I liked how it worked to make Faith's emotions more transparent and give Buffy more confidence.

I loved the little bit of Willow/Tara too, and devious Tara! Wonderful from start to finish. :)



Author's Response:

*waves excitedly*  First of all, thanks for approving me! *feels accepted*  I honestly never would've come up with this story in a million years if you folks hadn't included the stipulation that the fic must use 1 of the 5 provided plot elements.  That's what really helped spark the muse, I think.  Anyways, I'm so happy you enjoyed it!  I just couldn't resist the opportunity to embarrass the usually incredibly self-confident Faith, and from there the fluffiness practically wrote itself!

And yep, I just love Tara to bits and had to stick her in there somehow  c:

I do in fact have one more fuffy fic; one I recently started that will end up being super long probably.  I'll see if I can't get that posted here sometime this weekend.  You said to use my new fic posting powers for good and not evil.  Hopefully, angst isn't considered evil  :D



The Fire in Her Eyes by Imrryr

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Buffy and Faith have met before; many, many times.  A story of reconciliation, romance, and past lives.  Eventual Fuffy.


Category: Season > Season 4, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Angel, Anya Jenkins, Buffy Summers, Dawn Summers, Faith Lehane, First Slayer (Sineya), Joyce Summers, Riley Finn, Rupert Giles, Spike, Tara Maclay, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 38791 | Read count: 14618 | Published: 11/08/2013 | Updated: 02/16/2015 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1 - Chapter 1

I'm glad I nagged you to upload this fic. :) off to a great start here. I liked the idea of the spell not working because Faith is THE slayer now and they'll need her help. I share Willow's reservations about Xander being under cover though. He could get hurt. :/ I hope Riley won't play that much of a role here for obvious reasons. :p Interested to see what happens when they spring Faith. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks ^^  It took me a little while to figure out the best way to upload stories here.  It kept doing this thing where it would double-space every paragraph, but I finally figured out how to get it to not do that.  Don't worry about Xander, he'll be okay, well, mostly okay.  Fortunately, Faith's reputation should keep people from messing with him too much.  Yeah, and *sadly*, Riley's gonna take a long time to recover, so you wont see him for a long time.  Such a shame, really :D



Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Act 1 - Chapter 2

I liked the insights into Faith's thoughts here. I'm a big fan of the Angel/Faith friendship too so I liked his appearance. Interesting to see how Faith fares once teleported. 



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it!  Angel won't play a huge role in this story, but I think it's important for Faith to have sources of support from people outside of Buffy.  She'll gain other friends too along the way.



Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/11/2013 Title: Chapter 3: Act 1 - Chapter 3

Great chapter! :) I hate Willow, although that's a pre-existing problem. :p I was a little confused about the necklaces. Didn't Giles point out that prison couldn't actually hold Faith, and she was clearly staying of her own free will? Why would she need to be on lockdown now? I didn't like Buffy in that moment when she grabbed Faith and then didn't care at all that she hurt her. At least Joyce seems happy to see her. 



Author's Response:

I tend to agree.  It's hard for me to look past how she treats Tara, especially in season 6.

Regarding the necklaces, they're more for everyone else's peace of mind rather than to keep Faith in line.  Giles doesn't believe that Faith will do anything bad, but if they're all going to go up against Adam and his demon army, then he needs Buffy, Willow and Tara concentrating on the task at hand and not worrying that Faith is gonna run, or do something horrible to Buffy.  Obviously, in that respect, it hasn't fully worked, at least not as far as Buffy is concerned.

Oh, and Buffy does care, at least a little, she's just in denial.  She is the master of that, after all.  This takes place not long after the whole "apologize to me and I'll beat you death" speech, so she's not ready to forgive just yet, or admit any fault whatsoever, but it will happen.  And you don't have to worry that Buffy will continue to treat Faith this poorly.  Neither me, nor Buffy, is that sadistic ^^



Sweet Tyranny by Electra

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Past Featured Story

From friends with benefits to just friends, Buffy and Faith find that calling it quits isn't exactly as easy as it sounds.  Post-Chosen.

 


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 9262 | Read count: 8346 | Published: 04/18/2014 | Updated: 04/18/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/18/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Tyranny

Ms. Jerklectra, I waited all week for this, half fearing you'd disappear on Thursday, half daring to hope you'd post, and... you did not let me down! I loved this! :) (Can you believe my phone just typed a wink there? It has a crush on your phone. They're becoming self-aware. We may have a Skynet situation on our hands).

This was sweet and fun. The repetition of the 'thing I will only let you do if I'm drunk' was funny and so realistic. That is the kind of crap real life people do--to such an extent that you made me sad in my little single singleton life, and now you owe me more fic. :D I liked that they stuck to their agreement for the most part instead of Buffy being a two-timer. It felt realistic to them and in character. I liked that there was no angsty, but now I don't want you because I'm doing xyz part, and they just got together. V had one line and I liked it. Kennedy had none (or if she did, I blocked them out). I liked that even more. :p

You already know my vote, which is for another one-shot. Or like five one-shots.*Tosses some steak in the closet* Get working, girl! :D



Author's Response:

Haha!  I'll be honest, I did not rule out disappearing after day two of writing!  What can I say?  I'm lazy and incorrigible.  So thank you for pertering me to finish.  I'm glad I stuck with it this time.  :)

Also, your phone is a filthy whore!  Pour some bleach on that thing!  :p

Kennedy did not have any lines, you're right, but you'll be happy to know she stars in 11 of my next 12 intended fics.  Don't worry, they're gonna be good.  ;)

Thanks for reading and for the encouragement, friend.  I appreciate the steak.  Most people only throw tomatoes at me.  :p



Magnetic by Electra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

There's always been something magnetic about them, whether repeling or attracting.  Faith isn't exactly Mrs. Science but she knows something other than polarity is the cause.  Season 7 AU.


Category: Season > Season 7, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4678 | Read count: 3330 | Published: 04/27/2014 | Updated: 04/27/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/27/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Magnetic

"Faith is pretty sure that Ginny and Evie never tried slayer healing like she and Buffy just had." OR DID THEY? Oh wait, this isn't that kind of fandom. I'll just be over here in the corner with my bad jokes. :p 

I hope Faith snaps out of the Buffy induced haze before calling Angel. Don't tell him about advanced slayer healing through les sex! Damn girl, that's cold. :) I've never thought about twins being called as slayers before. I know it wasn't the point of the story but I thought that was pretty cool. Although they have evil sounding names. Probably because they sound British, and British teens are uniformly evil as I have learned from movies. *ducks Dylan's shoe with GW style grace* 

My ramblings aside, I loved this. I am awed by your fast writing ability. :) I am so happy to see you posting again! I loved the insight into Faith's background and the magnetic theme throughout. You are so good at injecting the funny into even sweet and wonderful scenes like here. I refuse to believe this is an all slayers phenomenon and not a Buffy and Faith and okay those twins that one time thing. Kennedy is not healing no one, no how, is what I'm saying. :p

Now write moar! Moar I say! :D 



Walk of Shame by Electra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

The walk of shame is always the worst part of a one night stand . . . especially when it happens more than once.


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: The One Night Stand series
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3230 | Read count: 2487 | Published: 05/07/2014 | Updated: 05/07/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 05/07/2014 Title: Chapter 1: One Chapter

Right! I have definitely read this before, but I don't think I've reviewed it before, so I owe you one. :) I like it! Faith knows just how to play it, giving her room to stay without making it too pressurey. Now I need more! More adorableness. More naked Faith. Bring it forth!



Dance of Joy by Electra


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

While Buffy does the walk of shame, Faith does a dance of joy.  (Companion piece to Walk of Shame, from Faith's point of view).


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: The One Night Stand series
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4332 | Read count: 2232 | Published: 05/08/2014 | Updated: 05/08/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed
Date: 05/10/2014 Title: Chapter 1: One Chapter

"Isn't this the part where you get outta dodge and leave your panties behind to torment me?"

Is my favorite line from these two fics. :D Funny that Faith was actually hiding them though.

I know it's not the point, but I like the Scoobies new lives as party animals. It felt like them somehow to be out drinking all the time, haha. I knew from the first fic that Faith was handling things just right, giving Buffy just enough lead, but it's interesting to see how aware she is of that. She's so slick. :p

So, where's part 3?



The Strangest Day by bobina

Rated: Everyone starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Faith finds herself in an awkward position after having a very strange day. 


Category: Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Adventure, Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 6451 | Read count: 5985 | Published: 05/13/2014 | Updated: 05/13/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/29/2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Strangest Day

I love Cave!Buffy, and I think she sort of does make sense. I think we could interpret the spell the bartender uses as reverting them to how he thinks about cave men, not actually as a historically accurate portrayal. :p Just go with me here.

This was so cute! I really liked that you said the lights were on, Buffy was home, but she couldn't do anything about it. Sometimes in cave slayer fic, she's like totally out of it and not Buffy like in the slightest. Your interpretation I like more.

Good Faith voice too! I especially appreciated her annoyance with Willow. :p



Author's Response:

Ha! I like your theory. I can't remember what the bartender's motive was now. He was jealous that the college kids were smart? Something like that. 

I'm glad that you like Cave!Buffy. She was fun to write, as ridiculous as it was. And yeah, I hear ya about other CaveSlayer stories treating her not at all like Buffy, but she's really herself in the episode, just really dumbed down and very much acting on base instinct alone. I thought that would help cut through all the bullshit between her and Faith, because normal Buffy never just comes right out and says what she means where Faith is concerned. And Faith is way too confused by Cave!Buffy for her usual defensiveness. 

I'm glad Willow and Faith worked for you! I needed a villian and Willow was never really on the Faith-train to begin with, so I figured she'd antagonize Faith the most over all of this. What can I say, I had fun with this one! It was a nice break from my usual angst-fests. :P



How Hard It Rains by bobina

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

It only takes an instant for things to change forever. 


Category: Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Rupert Giles, Wesley Wyndam-Pryce
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2997 | Read count: 2610 | Published: 05/13/2014 | Updated: 05/13/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/14/2014 Title: Chapter 2: Faith

Why did you encourage me to go and get depressed when you know I'm trying to finish Girl?? If everybody dies next chapter, you know who to blame! :p

I liked this. Using sex as a way of delving into Faith's self hatred was cool and I don't think I've read it done before, so I really liked it. It's interesting how out of sync the two of them are (both here and in canon). Faith reads so much into Buffy's actions, which I think really speaks to how deep her feelings for Buffy are. Her whole concept of self is based around how Buffy sees her. It's just so sad that she doesn't see that Buffy taking this step with her is (my interpretation anyway) about forgiveness and understanding and how much Buffy cares about Faith. Buffy's uncomfortable because she sees that she could have been in Faith's shoes, so her avoidance issues aren't totally or even mostly about Faith, but Faith always takes things personally. If she wasn't in such a terrible place, she could think rationally about Buffy. I thought for a moment there she would, but then you yanked the rug out from under me, and killed my happy feelings. :( 

Now I need you to go write the happy sequel, okay? I'll wait... :D



Author's Response:

I take full responsibility if you decide to kill anyone off in Girl. Just be glad I haven't started posting Because the Night here yet. I'm trying to finish it first (a million years later) before I subject anyone else to that angst-fest. 

In other news, this review is giving me feels in a way I didn't know a review could. Because you got this story in a way I don't think anybody else really has. They are on such different pages here, they're practically not even in the same book. I thought about writing both chapters from Buffy's POV so that her reasons for leaving the morning after would be clear, but I changed my mind halfway through and re-wrote it through Faith's eyes. It doesn't matter why Buffy left after: what matters is THAT she left. I left her motives up to interpretation on purpose, and I really like yours. Sorry I killed your happy feelings, but really, there was only ever one way for this to go in my eyes. 

You're going to be waiting a long damn time for that sequel, because it's never gonna happen, my friend. But I'm working on my opus/arch-nemisis, Because the Night, slowly but surely, and I'll hopefully be able to post it here sooner than later. Not that it's any less angsty... Hmm... *shrugs* 

*cackles*



Ghost by Dylan


Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

The past is a treacherous place best left well alone, but sometimes the only way forward is back at the beginning. 


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: PWP, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 3729 | Read count: 1924 | Published: 06/15/2014 | Updated: 06/15/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/29/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why have there not been more 'back to Sunnydale' fics?? I haven't read any actually, but reading this, I fell in love with the idea. It has so much creepy, apocalypsey potential. I love the idea of Buffy and Faith meeting up here and taking on baddies. The symbolism alone is amazing, them figuring each other out, while literally sorting through the rubble of their pasts. Squeeeee. Now where is the next chapter? Did you say this was only going to be two chapters? That is DEF not long enough. We need more. We need like 10 chapters of Dylany goodness. Please and thank you. :D Looking forward to more!!



Pray For Change by SilentlySlaying

Rated: Teen starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Four years have passed since Faith first arrived in Sunnydale. It's been three since she turned herself in to the police. Two since Buffy died. The last has been hell. But today Faith is finally coming home, and Buffy has been waiting for this moment for far too long. [Season 7, A/U]


Category: Season > Season 7, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 9162 | Read count: 12729 | Published: 07/20/2014 | Updated: 07/20/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've missed your writing, and I'm so happy to see you back! :) Now, when is the next story going to be up?

I loved every bit of this fic from start to finish. Buffy visiting Faith in prison is one of my favorite things to see, both because they need to make peace and because I love the image of two people who are so physical being forced to sit still and just talk to one another. My favorite was the visit after Joyce's death. I loved Faith's condolences, and Buffy's subsequent freak out. I also loved Buffy telling Faith to come home, because there's no question of where home is. Sunnydale was never her home in the past, but this relationship that's formed with Buffy is so strong that going where Buffy is is going home. To put that in a super clunky way. But I squeed and I aw'd through the forgiveness and the smoochies and the love.

Very good story, very believable and in character and wonderful and warm. Now write more! And if you kill Willow next time, I won't complain. :D



Author's Response:

Hmm, let's see, I think I have it pencilled in for the week after Omega Rising the 2nd is finished. Talk about wacky coincidences, right? :p

I hadn't thought about the Buffy/Faith/prison thing that way, but I do like it ( And now that you've mentioned it, I'm totally going to take credit for it :O ).

We can always pretend Willow tripped over the doorstep and hung herself on the phone cord (Kennedy didn't notice. She was too busy being a brat).

Thank you. :)



Connections by declan4

Rated: Everyone starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Anniversary Contest Entry. Set mid-'Consequences' and Post 'Graduation Day'. Buffy desperately tries to connect with Faith when their relationship seems on the brink of disaster. [S3, A/U]


Category: Season > Season 3, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: Anniversary Hootenanny 2014
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5182 | Read count: 6931 | Published: 07/24/2014 | Updated: 07/24/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/19/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Here I come to save the daaaaaay, errr, review your fic. :D I have issues with punctuality. Apologies for my slackerness. I read this twice. The first time I was disappointed about the lack of overt fuffy because I love me some smoochies. This time, I picked up more on the subtleties in the ending. It felt more fuffy to me. Which is always good. :)

I echo the other comments on the inclusion of the Ted story and on Buffy's willingness to obscure the truth a bit. I think killing Finch was very much a 'we' thing, but the way Buffy talked about it with Faith didn't always make it clear that she agreed. I liked very much her actions here. I liked her asking Faith to stay too. I would have liked to see that happen in canon. 

Liked the recap of season 3 and findings out how things changed with Faith there. Loved the playing cards innuendo. Very good fic overall. :)



Author's Response:

And I myself have issues with punctuation, which is why I have a very patient beta. We all have our crosses to bear. :P

 

I suppose I'm learning, that in regards to my writing, that I'm a fan of the slow-burn approach at the moment. (Although I too love Fuffy smoochies!)

I'm not sure if this trend will continue in the future but it was certainly evident here.

I did want to get across the closer relationship between Buffy and Faith during this alternate S3, and that their friendship would eventually develop into intimacy, so I'm glad that came across. :)

If you watch 'Ted' and then immediately go and watch 'Bad Girls/Consequences' it can an incredibly frustrating experience- because its pretty much the exact same thing that happens to Buffy (only what Buffy did I would actually consider less of an accident- she lost her temper and killed who she thought to be an 'ordinary man') you want to shake Buffy and go 'You know what happens in this situation, you know how Giles will react!' :(

Also agreed on the 'we' thing in the alley, although in Buffy's defence she does acknowledge this to Giles when she confesses all, just not to Faith when it mattered.

*Sigh* Anyway, out of all that, this fic was born. Buffy actually considering her own history, her own mistakes, and how to use it to reach Faith.

The other bit was from the realisation that its pretty much an exact year from when Faith gets all chosen (at the end of Beckoming Pt 1) to when she gets stabbed by Buffy (GD 1)- that's one hell of a year, and if circumstances had been different, a worthwhile anniveresy for celebration. With ribs. :)

Anyway, many thanks for the kind review.

I am still blown away by second place, considering the quality of all the stories I read. :)

 

 



Beautiful by Hayley

Rated: Mature starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

They meet at an event but end up celebrating something else entirely.  **Written for the C2 Anniversary Hootenanny**


Category: Season > Post-Chosen, Relationship > Buffy/Faith
Characters: Buffy Summers, Faith Lehane, Willow Rosenberg, Xander Harris
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Anniversary Hootenanny 2014
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4797 | Read count: 3192 | Published: 07/27/2014 | Updated: 07/27/2014 | Latest Chapter

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Reviewer: aliceinwonderbra Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07/30/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sweet! You surprised me because I wasn't expecting that they had previously broken up. I liked the portrayal of Buffy as becoming more reclusive and I suspect depressed, while Faith admits to the same. I got a sense of Buffy's feelings without dwelling on them. Happy they got back together too! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I thought about mixing it up a bit and have them already trying a relationship and failing.  I'm always a sucker for a happy ending so I just had to get them back together!  :)