love the tail!
Yea, i dig this. Like, really dig it. Like, its now an instant favorite.
Very interesting! I like how Buffy took Faith dying personally, taking out Slayervores left and right.
I think my favorite part is Faith having a tail with a mind of its own. So funny!
Really enjoyed this one! :)
Author's Response:Thank you!
Oh, Faith, still running away after all this time. So glad she came back at the end, and in suitably humorous style c:
Anyways, this was a really fun read and delightfully different from anything I was expecting. Faith felt perfectly in character to me, and I was particularly amused and impressed by the flying scene, as well as the description of Faith's physical changes. Excellent job, and best of luck in the contest!
Author's Response:Thank you, and the same to you!
So very different, and so very good! Kinda sad Faith died but... well we never find out she died until after she is re-intrododuced so no real mourning perior or anything.
The whole devil wings and horns and (lol!) tail thing was very entertaining and I can't believe it was never done before. To have Faith looking like a literal succubus? (I know you didnt mean for her to be a succubus but if you look up pictures of them they are your Faith-demon down to the last detail).. it was a fantastic idea.The interations between B and F were great too. I'm glad Faith went to find Buffy at the end in the hotel room, I didn't think she would.. thought she would pull a Faith and just vanish. Glad she came to her senses. Really enjoyed the story, good luck in winning the contest!
Author's Response:Thanks a lot!
I hadn't thought of Faith as a succubus, I was just going for a general devil feel, but you're right, that is a standard look for them and I think it adds a little extra something to the fic.
I enjoyed this on first read, although it took me a while to get used to the sentence flow and structures in the first couple of paragraphs. I didn't know if I was reading the sentences the right way... in the tone of voice you wrote them in. Don't worry, that's not a negative thing. I just wanted to enjoy the story as intended :)
FYI, I am poor at reading between the lines. I may have missed a lot of things in here. Sorry. On reread, I managed to pickup some of the subtle things shown in Buffy's thoughts e.g.
...."Sometimes you need to look one particular monster in the eye and tell it exactly why and for whom you're going to rip its heart out..."
... "Buffy paused, and then nodded. "Yup. Four months and five days.""
Awww...
And then you tell us that Faith died. --Aha! Ok.
You killed Faith? And sent her to hell. Wow, you're awful. Awful! In a very interesting way, your awfulness has provided us with a twisted story where Faith comes back to life, a demon, sans horns, wings, and... Wait for it... Tail! (that has a perverted habit of poking at sensitive places). Ok, you are not awful. You're awesome! And that's some dark, twisted sh!t that you did to Faith. You hate her or something? You're awful and awesome. *can we still be friends?*
You're good with dialogues. I enjoyed reading them. Also, funny.
I wish this was a longer fic. I would have wanted to see how this will pan out. Cause horn, wings, and tail doesn't really make Faith inconspicuous. Also, no more bikinis?!?! Mean! Bet that tail can go places.
Author's Response:Thank you so much!
You killed Faith? And sent her to hell.
Yup. I've done it before, too. ;) I wrote a non-B/F story a few years ago where Faith goes to hell and ends up challenging Satan to a duel, pitchfork vs scythe... It's not that I personally think she should go there, the point in this fic (which of course Faith can't say out loud since, well, she's Faith) is that Faith went to exactly the sort of hell she imagined, since on some level, which may have something to do with her unresolved issues with Buffy, she still thought she deserved to go there. Though hopefully not after this sort of welcome back.
I hadn't planned any more of this story, but it is interesting - you're not wrong about the tail. :) We'll see if I come up with any more.
Oh, I *LOVE* this. But poor Faith. But still, AWESOME!
I know this was just for the contest, but any chance we'll get more mileage out of this one?
Author's Response:Thank you!
I haven't planned any more, but it's an intriguing idea - devil!Faith definitely has potential.
this is a very original story! i LOVED it! bravo! made me chuckle and out right laugh at the end.
Author's Response:Thank you!
Hmm, the mind of Beergood is an interesting place... :p Character death, literally transforming into some sort of Hell's Angel, this fic was crazy. But crazy good. I LOVED it! The tail was fantastic, and I was oddly amused by Buffy nailing the slayervore right in the snout with her knife. Also loved the idea of Faith just picking the demon up, flying up several stories and dropping it to the ground. Awesome new power. :D It was cute, it was weird, it was funny. Bravo. :)
Author's Response:Thank you! It was a weird idea, but I just had to write it down. Glad it worked for you!