Great story!
like the story.
good story.
good chapter
good chapter
GOOD STORY.
Definitely loved this story, I hope it’s more chapters added soon
Hi!
Read the whole story through so far! It's not bad, but I'm going to give one criticism.
Ready...?
You're stalling. You've gone over the same undecided spiel every single chapter for the last ten chapters. I fully understand that you're trying to make this dramatic and all, but it's not. You're just spinning your wheels. You're taking a five chapter story and dragging it out to no purpose.
Don't get me wrong: The story itself is good. Quite good, in fact. Prego Buffy stories are a hoot. But with what you've got down for plot so far, this is a 15k word story, tops. It should have been done already, and you can move on to your next work.
~OW
Author's Response:In real life, problems aren't solved within the turning of a page. Could I have wrapped it up a lot sooner? Yeah, definitely. But, I had a whole other storyline running through this involving a vampire, who was looking to take over the town. I took all that plot out and this is what's left. Should I have rewritten it, probably, but I don't have the time to spare. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the matter though.
Love love this story. And I'm glad Buffy didn't give in right away. Thanks for shaing.
Author's Response:Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the feedback.
hey i just found this story on buffynfaith.net, completed last year! i don't understand why it's taking so long to upload it here...
and ow yeah, loved it! :D looked like an open ending to me, why not make a sequel?
Author's Response:Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, it's updated elsewhere. I update here when I can spare the time. I did intend there to be a sequel, maybe one day it'll happen.
Is this a Buffy/Faith centric story anymore?
All this other pointless stuff will have a point eventually I hope.
Faith!! Why!! - aside from that, I think this story is great. Keen to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:Glad you're enjoying it so far
Faith deserves a freakout. It's not everyday you wake up to find out you got another woman pregnant. Excited for the next chapter. :)
What! What! I wasn't expecting that! Ahhhhhh!
This build up is killllllling me. Great writing, thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the feedback.
Wow. Great set up for the next impending chapter. I think I know what's up with barfy Buffy, but I'm interested to see how it plays out. Great chapter and please update soon.
Author's Response:Thanks for the feedback. Glad you're enjoying it.
I'm addicted! :-) cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:Glad you're enjoying it. Apologies for the lack of an update. Here's chapter 5....
Interesting story. I can't wait to see where it goes. Update soonish, please;)
Author's Response:Glad you're enjoying it so far. Apologies for the lack of an update, here's chapter 5...
Oh man. I LOVE this!!
damn HOT, keep it up!
Author's Response:Glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Thanks for the review.