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Name: 4chunfvrsthbrave (Signed) · Date: 04/27/2020 11:23 PM · For: Chapter 5

I was reading one of my favorite fics for the nth time and caught something for the first time. "Clarice and Hannibal" made me laugh. I've read the book and seen the movie and I still missed that joke... until today. 

 

Your writing never fails to entertain me no matter how many times I've read it.



Author's Response:

Connie!

There's nothing better than making you laugh, except making you laugh at something you missed for years.

Wait, no it's better, even the best, that you keep re-reading and re-enjoying my Fuffys.

Thanks so much for the feedback. Your Chianti's in the mail : ) : ) : )



Name: Barachiel (Signed) · Date: 10/30/2018 01:05 PM · For: Chapter 1

Seeing as how no one else has reviewed this, I have to say, I love this one almost as much as its companion piece.  

Same comments and praise, with one minor critique.  This is a personal taste thing, so others may disagree.  I feel like you overused Faith's slang on her internal monologues.  Might want to tone it down just a notch when it's just her talking to herself.  



Author's Response:

How happy am I that you read this fic too? And survived it! It's a win/win without a loss anywhere in sight!

Hmm...you've raised an interesting point about overusing "Faith's slang". I'm probably in the "others may disagree" camp, but I also know it can be easy to overdo it. I'm just happy that it didn't ruin the fic for you.

Thanks for the feedback : ) : ) : )

Bobbi



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