Intervention
Love that you went for a 1 POV here, would be great to see you more in this style.
Author's Response:Thank you! I think the only other first person POV I've done is Omega Rising. I guess I feel more drawn to the third person! I'm greedy and want to be in both characters' heads.
Debridement
This was so good, I would love for a sequel for this specific storyline. Love how you write these two, I keep coming back to your stories because there's no one else who can write them as good as you.
Author's Response:Thank you so much.
Somnaire
I couldn't be happier with Riley's betrayal, it had the advantage of getting him out the way pretty quickly (sentimentally speaking)! :D
Well done to Buffy for showing a lot of resilience because honestly, who could resist the urge of walking away? Not canon Buffy, sadly.
Why do moms always show up at the worse time, really??? XD
Nice and sweet story, thanks again for your writing!
Author's Response:Thank you!
Sparks
Ah I can only imagine Faith's growing frustration when she get replied "about as lucky as you usually get". And we don't really explicitely get to understand why by the way... or is it that Buffy was still not over sending Angel to hell?
I like your rewriting scene of the "Spartan" hotel, and Buffy finally making a *real* effort to understand what's going on in Faith's head.
Thanks for this great fic ;)
Author's Response:Thank you! I think Angel probably has a lot to do with Buffy's hesitation to take this to the next level, yeah. If your one and only sexual experience culminated in your boyfriend losing his soul, you're probably a bit gun shy! Haha.
After the angst of the last two fics, the sheer fluff in this one has soothed my soul <3 thank you!
Author's Response:I'm glad! Thank you!
Debridement
I can feel the guilt and shame and angst from Faith leap thru the screen. So glad Buffy tried harder to give faith another chance. Thank you!
Author's Response:Thank you for going through all this old stuff! Glad you enjoyed. :)
Intervention
Hopefully buffy sees the light after this and gives faith a chance. Or like maybe apologizes for hurting faith. Lol I may be less than objective when it comes to people hurting Faith cuz she's just been through so much. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with the world <3
Author's Response:Thank you! I think this is one of few stories I have with a not explictly happy ending. I don't know where exactly they'd go from here, but I'd like to think they'd develop a real friendship which could lead to more.
Sparks
Poor Faith. I hope they're able to clear the air about Angel later. It hurts to think of Faith feeling like she's second choice. As always, wonderful fic. Thank you for sharing this with us <3
Author's Response:Thank you for reading it. :) I think they'll come to terms with the Angel development and make out okay.
The Awakening
Damnnnnnnn i think you've mastered the art of tender sweet moments following heartwrenching angst
Author's Response:Haha! My favorite genre. ;)
Somnaire
Oh wow oh wow love the tender scenes you write between fuffy here. Buffy's kiss on Faith's forehead as she comforted her and then later the kiss after she was saved - both such good moments. My heart is overflowing with warmth. Thank you!
Author's Response:Thank you for reading through these ancient stories and still enjoying them! Much appreciated. :)
Shelter
You write Faith so awesomely. I love her! I didn't watch much of the show so I don't know which parts are canon but I love the way Faith backed Buffy. Thank you!
Author's Response:It's always surprising to me when people love the fic but haven't watched the whole show! What drew you to the ship? Glad you liked this one!
I loved this series! I really like the idea of "these are all the ways they could have gotten together in canon" and how it highlights how legit this ship is. But it's also frustrating because urgh, so many wasted opportunities!
Will we ever get the 9th and 10th roads? (:
Author's Response:I think eventually I'll finish this off! It could already be finished if I added Therapeutic Intent and possibly Shivery to it, but I have like weird internal criteria for when something is allowed to count toward this series, and I didn't think either totally fit what I wanted. There are numerous other ideas I had for what the remaining one shots would be, although at this point we're talking about ideas from 10 years ago, so I'm not sure I'll do those or whether I'll think of something else. Long rambling answer, but yea, I'll finish at some point. 😝 I do have two more long stories in progress that I'll turn to after I finish Hypnopompia, which is what I'm working on now, so it may be a while before I get there. 😁
Is there anything you can't do?! This chapter was so amazing!
Author's Response:Ummm, touch my nose with my tongue? Or did you mean in stories? 😂 Action scenes are hard for me--those are probably my least favorite! Mostly because I get obsessive and then I have to watch fight scene clips etc and try to make the fight sound practical and doable. Even though I'm sure no one would care at all. The amount of research I do for fanfic is absurd. Thank the gods for the buffy wikia. 😂😂
I cannot adequately describe how much joy this chapter brought me. I always love the bits of a story where the Scoobies react/speculate on our girls relationship. It also helps that your characterizations are always perfect. Everyone walks, talks and reacts just like they should. You are a grand master, honestly.
Author's Response:It's definitely easier to write the light hearted/comedic reactions like I did here than to delve into the less supportive Scoobies that sometimes seem more authentic. I liked these scenes too! I don't think it's a secret that I'm not especially fond of Kennedy or Andrew, so I'm glad that their small parts felt authentic. 😊
Holy freaking crap! That was SO GOOD, and there is MORE?!??
Okay so I haven't read any Fuffy stories in so long that finding you (my favorite Fuffy author) have post several new stories/chapters is like finding mana from heaven, or an oasis in the desert.
I have already read this chapter twice because I am terrified of going to quickly and having it be over too soon and going back to a world with no new Aliceinwonderbra fics ahead of me. Thankfully though, as noted previously, it's been four years since my last big reread of your stories... which means I am about due I think!
Author's Response:Hahah! You're the best and totally making my day with your reviews! I am both excited for you to read the rest of the posted fic, and also dreading you finishing because then there will be no more reviews to look forward to! 😂😂
Thank you for being so into this little story! I started it thinking it was going to be a one shot, but it just kept getting longer with more story needing to be told. As is usually the case with me... It is also such a compliment to be anyone's favorite fuffy author because there have been so many good writers in this ship over the years. Thank you so much. You are the best! 😊😊
I went back and read your series and wow you never disappoint. So much talent and such a great ability to weave together a story. This installment had me from the get go and I soaked it up like a sponge. I’m looking forward to more works from you. Thank you so much for the entertainment. I’m truly a fan. Xoxo, Liz
Author's Response:Thank you so much for your kind words! I still have a lot of ideas and things in various stages of completion, life just gets in the way. I hope I keep putting stuff out and entertaining! Even at a very slow pace. 😂
Love this! Everyone is in character yet it's still so sweet and lovely. And funny with the teasing. Good job!
Author's Response:Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
What a great Fuffy story, really enjoyed this one,thanx! And no, this does not mean you are off the hook for your other ones...quite the opposite 😜
Author's Response:Whatttt? But I wrote a thing. That means I can fade into obscurity for another 12-16 months now. That was definitely the deal. 😊😊😊
LOVED this!!!
Thank you
Author's Response:Thank YOU!! :)
A truly perfect ending to a truly perfect . . . beginning? Yes. That's exactly what they have here. The beginning of a beautiful life. (And with that many people in one place, probably a life filled with many, many more embarassing moments. I love this take on a post-Chosen "what-if". It needs to be filmed and played every Christmas. The last few lines were perfect.
You'll always be one of my most favorite Fuffy writers ever!
Author's Response:And you are one of mine! Which is why you should come back. 😂😂 I feel like being a magnet for embarrassing moments is half of Buffy’s charm. I could recruit a few people to do a dramatic reading maybe. I call being Giles! Would that suffice for Christmas?
Reading this chapter at work was a mistake. You are a jerk for encouraging me, but like, the good kind of jerk. That's like 90% compliment and 10% disparaging. :D
Author's Response:I don’t believe I encouraged you to read this at work. 😂🤔 90% compliment is still a win in my book lol. I’ll take it!
At first I thought "wow, Willow's really being a dick! It's like she wants Faith to flip the table."
Then I realised the twist. The Giles outburst was a perfect touch. I look forward to your next venture into fuffy shennanigans.
Author's Response:Thank you! Giles was critically underutilized and he needed a win. Lol. For this fic and this fic only, Willow is not a dick. Tune in next time when Willow will surely return to form. :D :D
I survived! I joke. It really wasn't that bad. I think it was fairly toned down compared to your earlier fics, but still heated enough to make most warm blooded men and women get hot under the collar. I really liked the pool scene at the start, seeing Faith hang out with the gang and everyone getting a moment (even Andrew!) and I enjoyed the build up from Faith's POV.
I also thought that it was a really nice touch that you referenced how Buffy worries she'll be alone after a new sexual encounter because of how her first time with Angel went.
I sent you a message on here, but I've had no reply to it so I assume you never got it! I replied to a bunch of stuff you said in the last review I did and haven't a clue what you asked now! Find it if you can!
Author's Response:Oooh, huzzah! Thank you for the heads up. I found the email in my spam. For some reason gmail sometimes identifies my C2 emails as spam (I have them forwarded to my gmail), so good reminder for me to check there. I am currently bingewetching Season 2 of Mindhunter, so I will email you back tomorrow! I did get a good laugh/snort though when I read your comment about using “her sex” in a story since I def did that lol. Oh well, you lived. I did not use cunt though. But now next time, you know I will, just to be a shit. You know I’m kind of a hater of some of the Scoobies in the later years, so I’m glad they cooperated in my mind for this scene. And glad it came across well. :D
Yes! This is a super sweet storyline. Big fan of the character interactions... and now there's more on the way!
Author's Response:Yes! :) Thank you, glad you are enjoying it!