Reviews For Chicago, My Kind of Town
Name: Elphaba (Signed) · Date: 11/17/2018 12:08 AM · For: Chapter 10: Payback's a B*tch
Beautifully written; great use of angst, and everyone stayed true to their characters. Beautiful Fuffy.
...but now what?
Name: topak (Signed) · Date: 09/10/2013 08:38 AM · For: Chapter 5: Whatever Makes You Brave
Ok. This has turned out differently from my memory. I forgot how much of an asshole Faith has become. Why did she cheat on Bree again? What a coward. Couldn't she just break it off?
How old are they around this time anyway? And there goes Buffy contemplating the idea of stripping for Faith. I know that she broke Faith's heart that day, in the past. But really? NO stripping. Maybe I am putting my principles too much on buffy. Fine. Go! Strip!
Name: topak (Signed) · Date: 08/22/2013 10:39 AM · For: Chapter 4: All Over the Map
Faith's an immature asshole. Seriously.
I feel so sorry for Bree. She didn't do anything to deserve that kind of treatment. No one deserves to be cheated on. Least she could have done was break it off first before going on that route.
I'm glad Buffy wasn't there to argue with her. Jealousy is never a good thing, especially if it was your own doing.
Suck it up Lehane.
Name: topak (Signed) · Date: 08/19/2013 09:08 AM · For: Chapter 3: That's Not My Name
Ummm... maybe I shouldn't have read that while I am at work. Because... you know... it's making me uncomfortable *cheeks heating up*
Wow. Seems to me like Faith overreacted to Buffy's reply of them taking things slow. I know it's not all right for Buffy to downplay what happened between her and Faith, but she shouldn't just runaway after an apocalypse either.
You know what? If my memory serves me right (probably it doesn't), I remember siding with Faith on this last time I read the story. Wow, old age does change my perception.
LoL! Chunky Monkey sounds great to me Buffy. I'll sit with you as long as there's a tub for me too. So she did go on that date with Satsu.
Poor Bree. Kinda hurtful that she's living in the shadow of Faith's first love.
Name: topak (Signed) · Date: 08/15/2013 11:53 AM · For: Chapter 2: I'm in the Business of Misery
"But she realized she wasn't jealous that Faith had seemed to accomplish what she never could – a healthy relationship; instead, she was jealous that Faith was enjoying such stability with someone who wasn't Buffy."
Ok. I love Fuffy. I love Buffy. But I just realized how selfish Buffy is in this chapter. She comes into Faith and Bree's home. And she flirts with Bree's girlfriend... in their bedroom no less. That's kinda low even for you Buffy.
"..."to roll over and thank my lucky stars?"
Name: topak (Signed) · Date: 08/06/2013 12:43 PM · For: Chapter 1: Windy City
I've never mentioned it before, but this was the fic that hooked me to your writing. I was an anonymous newbie, sulking at the corners of bnf. I was scared to make comments cause I've never done it before. But I wanted so much to tell you that I loved this story. Guess this will be the perfect time! I haven't reread this in ages. I vaguely remember the details. Poor memory and all.
Buffy, Buffy, always the center of the universe. I can't even... ! So selfish.
Author's Response:It's crazy to think about a world in which you were an anonymous newbie, dear topak. It's also crazy to think how long I've been writing fuffy.