OMG I literally just got the half-baked cookie dough reference thanks to another reviewer that explained it
Faith is so cute and cunning with her innuendos
At first I thought the end was funny... Until I remembered Angel's and Buffy's little conversation about how she's cookie dough and not yet baked all the way... hahaha
I could just imagine Buffy blushing like mad while it was a private joke between her and Faith. And Faith saying it all innocent like and Buffy knowing just how dirty it is. Great little fic. Made me gaffaw :)
that was perfect! and totally unexpected!
My brain was starting to go down that dirty road, and Faith goes talking about cookie doughs. Haha.
I think Faith can talk about the most normal thing and I'd still easily slip into thinking about sex.
Hello! Just gonna give a quick review. :) This story is short and sweet, although there's me wishing it could have been a little longer, so I could enjoy more of it!
I liked the banter you had between the characters over the food.
My only qualm is in the pure dialogue sections, there's no obvious indication of who is talking. So when I'm trying to picture the scene in my head, it's difficult because it's unclear which of the characters is delivering the line. Just a little observation, but as it's a short one shot, perhaps this isn't too important. I just like having a crisp image in my head. :)
Since this one was written a long time ago, I hope that means you've continued on writing! :D
Squee.