Reviews For
Touch The Sun
Name: Elphaba (Signed) · Date: 08/18/2016 10:09 AM · For: Chapter 16
Beautiful story.
My only critique and it's not solely aimed at you, because almost every Fuffy writer does it, and that is write faith as if she's a guy with a vagina. And after rewatching season 3 that's not how she talks thinks or acts. She's much more a sexy sultry seductress / wild child. But not butch or talks about her balls or boners or fucking people.
anyway. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and would love to read a sequel if you could do one.
thank you for writing this.