Fantastic job. Really enjoyed that. It was short and sweet and awesome. Cudos on your story. And that was a LONG love scene but hey, no complaints about that :)
Author's Response:Thanks for the feedback! Very happy you enjoyed the read. :)
Aww. Finally heads were pulled from light deficient places. I'm glad. Great general payoff for the fic, great writing. *sigh* feels good. You're such a good and prolific writer. :). Faith finally opening up was painful but in a good way. Loved how it turned out in this chapter.
Author's Response:Thank you! It's a struggle for Faith to open up to anyone, even if that person loves her. It's bound to be a little painful.
5 weeks of avoiding each other after Buffy turned her down for sex? Geez what a bunch of whiny wimps. Maybe Faith is just an emotional retard... ok I can see that. Not really knowing enough/having enough experience to realize what may be troubling Buffy. But Buffy is the most retarded of them all, its frustrating.
Maybe its just me but I'm direct and hate all that pussyfutting around. If I was in Buffy's shoes I'd be like "Hey, I want you. But if you come back to my place/I go to yours I want us to spend the night together. I loved it that first time we did it and I don't want to go back to not doing that again.". See? That would solve all of the immideate and many of the long term problems.
Oh well. We know that both our Slayers are not the smartest people emotionally speaking. Makes for good drama but can be damn frustrating. Great chapter, look forward to the next.
Author's Response:Yep, both of them are emotionally challenged, just in different ways. They both are frustrating that way.
"""I never have seen your dorm room."
Buffy looked at Faith with a furrowed brow, not expecting the comment from the other slayer. "No . . . I guess you haven’t." She thought for a moment or two on what to say next, not knowing what exactly she should say. "Do you want to?"
"Sure."""
Haha Oh Buffy Buffy.. it doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out where that was going to go. I'm sure it must have crossed her mind.. and she must not have cared. Cue exciting citrus scene. It was well done, kind of a quicky get some and get gone for Faith. Totally feel for Buffy. Sigh. Good stuff. Hope it works out soon :)
Author's Response:Oh, Buffy wanted it to happen but she figured Faith would understand that she should stay. Oh, so much miscommunication.
Emotionally stunted/unavailable/inexperienced/etc Faith. How you make ze fanfics dramatic and interesting. Very nice second chapter. It's fun how they can't be alone for more than a minute before they are all over each other. Ahh I remember days like that =). I'm glad they are at least talking... and trying not to be too awkward.
BTW the reader is guessing Faith left because her feelings were too confusing. Just an educated guess. Good stuff :)
Author's Response:It's fun to write Faith as not quite getting Buffy and Buffy as not getting why Faith doesn't get her. Your guessing may be correct. ;)
Feels legit that Faith would be kinda clueless why Buffy would be so pissed off. But I mean haha... I'm sure if she thought about it long and hard it would come to her. Guess she just didn't want to think too hard about how it would look to Buffy if she just took off and how she would take it. Oh man, oh well.
Looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:Yeah, Faith is kind of emotionally clueless when it comes to thinking about what Buffy feels. Thanks for the feedback!
Hayley,
Another wonderful story I really loved how Faith explained her feelings to Buffy. The romance was true to chacharter
Thank you
Author's Response:Thanks! Happy you enjoyed reading this one. :)
Author's Response:Thanks! Happy you enjoyed reading this one. :)