This was a really sweet, well written story. I loved the careful characterization of Faith and her redemption path and Buffy. I feel that Buffy gets sometimes stuck in "17 year old" mode around Faith, and you matured her fantastically. I'm excited to read your other work!
Good ending! I always need some new story fixes and happy endings.
Hopefully you will have a lot of new stories!
liked the fic. and luved the ending! enjoyed your characterizations, really liked that B wasn't a Bitch, to many authors make her the bad guy and I hate that.
really luved buffy decking that sleeze bag. like how protective shes being towards faith. and your right what we go through makes us who we are.
Author's Response:Yeah, Buffy is really protective of Faith. It's one of the reasons she's along for the ride. Happy you liked the chapter! :)
interesting little twist with kates boyfriend. nice that faith has grown enough to lend a shoulder to a friend. kind of would like to see buffy and faith travel together for awhile, see if they will get along, being together so much. nice up-date. really like this fic.
Author's Response:Thank you! I wanted to show that Faith has grown enough to be able to really be a friend so that's why I brought Kate back. I do plan to have them travel together soon as well. I appreciate the feedback! :)
nice action packed chapter. is there going to be more of kate?
Author's Response:Thanks! I think I'll put more of Kate in eventually. I like her character. Thanks again for reading/reviewing! :)
I must say I'm liking the concept- Faith having a fresh start. Nice to see a story from her point of view.
Good stuff
Author's Response:Thanks! I thought it would be fun to explore what would happen if Faith discovered what she wanted on her own. Happy you're liking it so far! :)
LOVE this story. Hope there will be more updates soon
Author's Response:Thanks! There will definitely be more updates once I get some time to write. Soon hopefully! :)