Excellent! I loved that Faith thought she literally had to have a conversation with her own heart, a physical one, shows just how little love experience she has had as opposed to sex, which was the point I think and you did it brillantly. This story gave me the warm fuzzies, but the last scene made me wonder if maybe it would be too late for them because Buffy didn't seem to be giving in, but so glad she did. I was really worried she was going to say that she was involved with Satsu or something for a minute there and we would have a sour ending, but no such malarky. Awesome writing. Very clean of grammatical errors and the like. Very tightly edited, not overwritten, and stylized. You definitely have a talent. Congrats.